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russies
buzzkill
austrailsumthing??? i forget

sharpe like an edge, and blunt enough to cut flesh:
get killed w/ words that been said, and left a mess:
a verbal clash, when i wip ass, on gayass dick riders:
continue, to pursue, to tear, mc's bear, w/ my insisors:
got the power, to have u devoured, an leave u mangled:
spit words like cum, an quick to leave ur cerebrum, tangled:
one man u can't handle, w/ bare hands i'll have u strangled:
i got the intagables, to do more than compete, in the game:
like canables, i'll eat, mc's and newbies to put'em to shame:


flows off but its just a quicky

good shit man, feelin ur flow.. some kool wordplay u have a nice style, stick wit it keep spittin, holla

not bad, short and sweet, not very complex, some alright lines nothing stood out to me but keep uppen your creativity and wordplay your flow was on point but your vocab was somewhat weak, I think you could of had more into this but good for a start keep uppen

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not bad man, keep it up, yah very simpol;e n realistic in the perfect sense

Man your feedbacks are shit...leave better feedback on 3 other open mics and PM me the links and i will re-open this but for now this is Closed.



re-opened..Make sure you leave better feedback next time.

upp'n my shit....

Keep tryin'..
In a positive way..
This wasn't bad, decent tho to short.
Real constructive feedback N/A..

thanx for the crit man

..Short and nice..your wordplay was nice..your flow was there..looking forward to the extended version..

nice shit

this had sum good flow to it.. another short piece
but good flow none the less.. the content was ight.
for a quick keystyle n' all.. would like to see more
n' longer pieces.. shit you actually try on

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nice spit, not really too long but it was to the point. Had a nice flow to it. The bar structure and rhyme scheme were prety good 2. Overall a good keystyle, but it would prob be better if it was longer.

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the flow was pretty tite and u had sum good vocab but it was realy simple maybe crank it up with some multis or something