i remember when i first wrote a poem n' spoke
through notes of flow inside my mind in quotes.
the time i reached law - and the time i saw it
from winning to losing, I remember applaudin'
causin' the rawness to use me when rockin'
no nonsense when thoughts click so awesome
I remember the times I succeeded to fail - please
The time i defied the belief I'd always fail to succeed
or truely believe i'd achieve all of my dreams,
but i won't, and will continue to never complete...
a heart, to care, i've never been there, once true
I remember when we said we loved - do you?
the letters of melody might've spanned my soul
but they must've chose another path to go.
I remember gettin` cocky, and talked too proud
The time I tried walkin on water, and sunk right down
that single moment when i thought it was possible
to do the impossible, play god for a single moment
to control it and hold in my power a singles fate
I remember the times I had these thoughts, and awake...
for Christs' sake, my mind aches from endeavours that're due,
i chew my words, think back to an old ink pad i used
The times I had thr right to say whatever was true
and do you remember the time i lost my memory- I do.



tHeuNDeRaCHiEvERs.

^ My favourite parts.

All-round Nice piece Termz. I like your flow
very much so. I think everyone can relate
to this piece and the imagery is evidently
clear.

Keep up the Good work, dude.

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this was a good post all and all you really impressedme some error but there is no perfection here so never the less hot

fuck sleepers, up!

Simple yet clear imagery did the trick.
Good structure accompanied with a nice flow.
Basic concept, execution was fresh.
Easy to relate to, close to home..
Keep droppin' n enhancing your scripts.

strait up it was strait loco