She's Walking Around, Head Down, Talking To The Ground
Everything To Be Fine, She's Wanting That Now
All Those Spots On Her Body, She Ain't Flauntin' Um Proud
But The Bullies Noticed N Are Tauntin' Her Loud
It's Not Her Fault Her Daddy Has A Drinking Issue
Instead Of Hitting The Books, She Gotta Think With Tissues
Letters Of I Miss You. . To Her Deceased Mother
Release From This Struggle
She Wants This But She Can't Tell Another
Reason Being, Her Dad Has Proclaimed Sabotage
Black Mail, So Now Her Hopes Are A Mere Mirage
Lips Shut, Tits Fucked, She Don't Wanna Be Dead
She Got Sexual Abuse And The Other Bullshit On Her Head
Dad Says She's Stupid, But She Has Knowledge
But That's Wasted, Money Spent On Beer, No Cash For College
She Needs To Get Away, She Prays For A Better Tomorrow
She Wants A Good Life Borrowed. . In Exchange For Her Sorrow

[Chorus]
Her Life Is Complicated, She Doubts She'll Make It
How Much Longer Can She Take This ? She's Ready To Break Shit
Dad Lingers, Drunk As Fuck, Tryna Will Her To The Bedroom
She's Dying Inside And Actually Hopin To Be Dead Soon

"Get In This Bed You Fucking Slut, Daddy's Gotta Go Soon
While You're On Your Way, Spray Some Of That Perfume"
She Deals With This, Everyday, She Hates The Incest
But It's Sex Unless, She Wants That Promised Bullet In Her Chest
She Has No Friends To Run To, She's Always Been Secluded
Her Appearance's Polluted, Each Day She's More Diluted
"What Are You Fucking Scared ? Ain't Like Daddy Will Harm You
Doesn't Daddy Charm You ? Be A Freak Baby, I Know How The Calm Do"
She Cringed At These Words, Didn't Do What She Was Told
He Struck Her, Then Fucked Her, Now It's Her Own Blood She Holds
Her Eyes Red, She's Crying, Trying To Figure Out Why
But She Cleans Up, Continues In Strides While Keeping Shit Inside
Outside, She Always To Her Self, Wonderin' If Anyone Has Felt
Or Dealt With What She Has, Her Thoughts Erased By A Belt
Cracking Against Wood, Her Dad's Home From Work, Beer In Hand
Next Day, She's Sobbing, But Someone Says "Why Those Tears Ma'dam?"

[Chorus]
Her Life Is Complicated, She Doubts She'll Make It
How Much Longer Can She Take This ? She's Ready To Break Shit
Dad Lingers, Drunk As Fuck, Tryna Will Her To The Bedroom
She's Dying Inside And Actually Hopin To Be Dead Soon

She Finally Felt Air Breathed Into Her Life, The Sight
A Young Man Her Age, Wanting To Take Her Out That Night
Said She Was Beautiful, And For The First Time In Months. .
. . She Smiled
It Was Illuminating And She Forgot The Hatred For A While
She Went Home, Quickly Dressed N Crept Out The Door
She Almost Laughed, While Sneakin Out N Hearin Her Dad Snore
The Man Picked Her Up, They Went Out And Had A Good Time
She Dreaded Going Home, Begged To Not Leave Her Alone Under The Moonshine
He Said He Had To, But Would See Her Tomorrow, Then Kissed Her
Not Knowing He'd Miss Her N She'd Be Gone From The Physical Picture
She Approached Her House, Smelt The Liquar, She Tried To Creep In
But Her Dad Tripped Her, Hit Her, Yelling "Where Have You Been?"
She Screamed, Blood Curdling, For Him To Get Off Her Please
He Struck Her Again, Then Told Her To Bend, Next Is Knees
But Midway Through The Humiliation, He Stopped, Lost His Patientence
He Smelled Cologne From The Young Man. .
. . Proceeded To Beat Her N Toss Her Down The Stairs Of The Basement
Loaded The Gun, Told Her Not Say Shit As He Made This Statement
"I Loved You, I Swear I Loved You, And That's Why I Fucked You
You Mean So Much To Me, That's Why I Always Touched You
But You Didn't Have To Cheat Like Your Mother Did, Damnit
Where's My Drink ? Fuck It, I Made A Promise Now You Can Have It"

Gunshot

Such A Smart Lady, Didn't Live To Full Potential
All Because Of A Drunk Dad And Pistol, Girl I Miss You
Your Dad Got Dealt With, Don't Worry Anymore, He Won't Hit You
I'll Be Up There Soon, For Our Second Date To Get You. .

This A Real Issue. . Take Notice. . If You See Someone Down. . Pick Um Up. . See What's Going On. . Cause You Don't Know What They're Going Through. . Save Them. . Before It's Too Late. . This Was The Story Of A Girl. .

nice Man i always Enjoyed Your Pieces...this one was really Good i enjoyed your Flow Which is always Good...ya Have Nice Structure And Good vocab in this And One Of Ya best i think...so all and all i'd say this was a decent Piece..ya reallly used the topic Well ya Didnt Really Play It Out....PeacE....

Appreciate That. .

Lemme Mention. . The Idea Of Sexual Exchanges Between A Daughter And Father Was Partly Inspired By Salvation's Pretty Girl, Wrong Love Track. . I've Always Wanted To Touch On The Topic Of Controlling And Abusive Fathers Towards Their Children. . And Salvation's Track Reminded Me. . So I Wrote This In About 30 Minutes. . So Thanks To Sal-V For Inspiring Some Of This. . Pz.

yo man some good shit, nice to see u back again and in the game bro. but anyways your flow was good and some extremely good content in here, vocab and wordplay was dope to and it's good to see someone touch up on this topic. nice drop bro keep it up. peace.

yo man peep mine and Yaz's collab called "Stories of Old ft. Yaz" it should be near the top and leave some feedback plz and thank you. keep up bro.

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thought this was a good concept and ya got it off in a good light... for the length you kept the interest in well and kept to the topic...... the flow was pretty consistent thru it, but some of the lines, the speach seemed to be put there cos it fits, som of them could have been re-worded to get the point across..... but pretty good drop...

I liked dis piece nice story
nice flow and vocab
keep dropping
8.5/10

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