yoyoyoyo,
i know what you thinking... you figure since-
u ashamed of impitence you'll just dick ride NONCENTZ.
the difference is im really ill from the miniscule molecule in my druel-
the type of ILLyou FAKE so you wont have to go to school.
Im 3 times iller then any m.c.-my 98 farenheit turns 298 degree-
spit at you and creamate you to debree.
When I release my monoxide.......
Heat waves turn to heat strokes provoked by quotes spoke-
The residue outcome is 2nd hand smoke mixed in anthrax tokes.
When subject matter and verb become action leaving bones broke.
its SON~DAY,
i ressurect my career in 7 bars-beating heavens brains retard-
leave em bleeding hair lines receiding,
domes left ajar.
use an ink cartridge to seprate you mouth ridge from you cartilage-
cause you wouldnt drop knowledege... dropping out of college.
you fabricate your life 50 percent cotton-
i spit punchlines til my brains blood clotten.
i battle with words....
verbal cold wars with mtephors-yall some fake crips spitten folk~lore
im firing each letter in caps- like they was discharged from gats-
twist your wig back, till your hariline starts at your rectol crack.
the impact resembles nuclear warheads....if you haten this-
ill murder you ,your fans,fam and crew
dropping bombs and incinerate all within a 100 mile radius.
im ill with this... my lyrical brain weight is as~vast-
as an obeice mans' physical mass-
when i got ill shit on my mind...my behind shits mustard gas.
i destroy heavens... leave em brain poralasis from lyrical edekets-
MY SINGULAR FORMAT RIPS IN PREDICATE.
you dont want non your spinless like invertebrates.
i rhyme for me so fuck you!....a half ass means half a heart-
you been in it this a minute i been flowing since noahs ark.
displace your faith when you face to face with the begotten
ill leave your skill missing your career so close to forgotten-
you face is already on milk carton.

no replies?... well i thought this was pretty good, ive seen you with better, but this was still good.... i liked the use of wordplay... i think you've always got a wierd structure, with the amount of syllables you use in your bars, but it still seems to carry the flow.... yep.. i liked this well worth the read.... keep at it twin....

Uppin

Nice......always a good drop from you.......

i never expect anything less from you dawg........

Your flow was there an your vocab was sick! It was all there dawg......Always a pleasure to read your work.....Your probably the MC with the most intriguing bars...no lie......once again good shit WORD!

If you got the time peep my latest...Its a different style for me...I gave you a shot out in it as well......an i hope to see more of your work soon!

Foresight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113141

OH FUCK YA, YOUR BACK TWIN!!! WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN? I've missed our collabos! god damn!

as usuall hot shit my man. I love the canibus-esque style you bring to the table, wordplay, those legendary lines, like that "The type of ill that you fake so you don't have to go to school!!"
shits awesome, hit me up for collabo bro

Damn...havent seen ne drops from u WP in a while but newayz...like eleete said ur drops have alwyas been dope n u keep gettin doper evrytime u drop sumtin new...once again uve dropped sum more good shit...in this drop u had samething u always have...strait dopeness, no flaws to mess u up or nuttin...keep spittin to de fullest n peep my shit one day n see if ive improved or not

Peace

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uppin this for my boy

Uppin

shit was tite.

you face is already on milk carton.

Lots of people use that milk carton thing tho so i dunno gettin kinda played. Overall pretty nice. Nice style and flow to it. An en joyable couple minutes of reading...i thank you...lmao

~holla if ya hear me

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