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03-21-04, 02:11 AM
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Youngin jus call me Young
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first open mic so be nice and honest
IP: 4948 3CF8
MA FRIEND
ma best friend died i feel no pain i don't kno if i'll go crazy,if i wil go insane i don't understand no crying no tears even tho this event fufilled ma worst fears i have no idea y life has treated me this way i don't kno to live or die goin on from this day i am not a soldier who wuz built to have no feelings i feel closed up inside like a steel house wit steel ceilings i don't kno if this is tha way i spose to feel i mean sad but happy like a jus signed a deal i spose i don't feel quite sure of maself i wonder if ur dad died how u wud have felt gimme real replies |
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03-21-04, 02:19 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 525D FF37
is that a true story?????????????????????????????????????????
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03-21-04, 02:25 AM
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Spiritual Respiration
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IP: C1DA C961
aye Young was that supposed t be a freestyle or poetry. because if it was a freestyle you shouldve picked a dfferent topic. but it was hot as hell if it was poetry. Just work on ya grammer and ya structure
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03-21-04, 02:45 AM
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....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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IP: 6236 079F
yo I feel you dog if that was a true story
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03-21-04, 03:56 AM
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Youngin jus call me Young
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IP: 4948 3CF8
not tru..don't kno if fuckin poetry or freestyle..lol..jus wrote..sorry if not freestyle...
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03-21-04, 04:09 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 2A85 59BA
I felt that.
Keep rhymin nigga.
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03-21-04, 10:50 AM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
Pretty good. Could've been freestyle or poetry. Very deep stuff, though it wasn't true. This topic isn't really something to judge, so i'm just going to say it was iight. Flow was a little off, besides that its ok.
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03-25-04, 12:21 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 0934 DA79
uhmm it was real....ummm....well..it was just real. Keep writing and El a vayte!
Chyea!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Holla!!!!!! |
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03-25-04, 02:04 PM
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This is my first post!
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IP: C26B ABC4
that was chill, keep rappin
**dj dArK |
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03-25-04, 06:47 PM
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New to RB
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IP: D5F5 AA5C
Nice shit dude. Coulda used a little more flow, but I liked it alot.
Sorry for ya too. Shit happens =/ Keep droppin' bro. 0-Sum |
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03-25-04, 09:44 PM
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Youngin jus call me Young
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IP: 4948 3CF8
annoucement i'm a gurl..lol..its coo zerosum...oh AND REP NC ma nicca
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03-25-04, 09:44 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 1424 2422
Nice start. Nice Topic. Yeah, could have made it more "Freestyle" oriented. I like the topic... Its no cool to post a battle rap...
Cmon girl. Run the shit through Microsoft word...It looks herbish with spelling mistakes and punctuation errors!
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03-25-04, 09:48 PM
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look at this
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IP: 225A 1A09
that shit waz tite ssome deep ass shit shoulda kept goin an made it longer though
1 huned |
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