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Angel of Death
IP: F0E5 490C
As an angel sits watching the scene shivers begin to engulf her
She prepares for what she is about to witness and in her seat she starts to stir Below a child has wondered too far and has already begun to cry This angel takes a deep breath n waits as a crystal tear escapes her eye A child...lost in a suburban jungle cries for a mother that cannot hear Her eyes scanning her surroundings hoping that she might still be near Stumbling blindly but she finds that this jungle only expands Suddenly she stops crying...a warm embrace has taken her hand She stares into this stranger's eyes her own eyes stained with tears He offers her some candy...it's sweetness melting all her fears Leading her away from the crowd she follows...no hesitation As he buckles her into the seat her blue eyes fill with desperation She begins to object...reaching for the door but he has started the car As he drives from the scene...her mother...she wonders if his going far Tears streaming down her face once more...she begins to call 4 her mum As he watches this helpless child he wonders what he has become No longer can she see buildings...tree's are her new scenery As the car pulls up beside a river...all she can see is greenery He opens her door to get her out and she sinks lower into her seat A child put into an adult's world...she knows she has met defeat She wakes on the waters edge...he is no longer anywhere in sight Staring down upon her...smiling...is an angel all dressed in white She glances up to the heavens as she bends down on one knee And whispers softly to the child...'Come baby...your coming home with me.' Stay Up! ![]() |
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IP: 4289 77F4
Very Deep And Expressive...i Like....keep Them Comming
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IP: 4289 77F4
nice man, this could be classified as a poem or story, very descriptive and vivid, i had the imagery in my head, nice detail, good job, and keep it up....peace
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