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Old 07-20-04, 11:54 AM   #1
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anyone want beef wit me or my crew?

IP: FDD6 AE15

Kid, my rhymes bust niggaz head like the wardens at Riker's Island
I'm whylin, a ninja on the track when I bring my shaolin style in
mind evolution, is the tip I'm on, record revolutions, I'm Jack-the-Ripper gettin em dead wrong
stalkin' like a zombie through the landscape like fright night
jec, n ladydef, you worked ya voodos jus right, provoked Killa Kizza to arise from his gravesite
sendin ya boy on the true rampage mission
sippin, the E n J got my mind flippin, grippin throats, jugulars I be rippin'
gargle blood in my throat, leave no evidence the scene is Murder she wrote
that you can quote, cause tryin' to disturb Kizza could get you hung like a coat
Word on da street iz you only as good as the last nigga you killed
But I ain't have to do it, ya'll be E-tarded poppin' pills in ya grills for cheap thrills
Da only trees I cut down on streets, dat sticky green, split blunts on my platinum fronts, roll em thick, meaty n mean
'cuz on the streets you have to keep ya wits about youse, cuz niggaz will erase you, without a chance to choose
I pour a lil liquor for friends in past, never wanted to lose
seem like ruse hatched by god to remove me from my crew
Now I envision it from a different angle, I been saved from gettin my wig mangled
Put in a different place, icein ma's wrists wit platinum bangles
These boardz sketchy like stan, lynch mo b-boyz than the KKK clan
Racist fucks, I ain't done nuttin but work for your race
your government don't do nothin but work on keepin niggaz like me in my place
Faded on ya'll jakes, changed my address and my Hasty graces
stayin' away, baste you chickens with my hydroponic glazes
You couldn't last in my races, go chase real criminals, catch some real cases

Yo dis next part specifically fo a nigga called Legacy, if you real, you gon come wit somethin nigga.....

my impregnable rhymes in permanent stasis because they timeless
Invertebrate slime,after this, all heads will see you're spineless
my flashy superhuman flows, pop like bulbs to give you blindness
Ya girl left for the same reason I'm endin this battle, dog, you straight dimeless
mindless, is how you write your scripts, your line will go flat after I cold stab you with my 'ice' picks
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Old 07-20-04, 11:56 AM   #2
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to explain, jec n ladydef is some friends of mine.
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Old 07-20-04, 11:58 AM   #3
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shits coo. You doin good. you the best in the crew.
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Old 07-20-04, 12:04 PM   #4
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ya'll be spittin?
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Old 07-20-04, 12:06 PM   #5
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yeah

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mines are gotta keep it real.and i love you too much.check em out.
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Old 07-20-04, 12:11 PM   #6
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this track was keyed to Release Yo Delf by Method Man.

here's another gem I just thought up for Legacy

does a word rhyme twice if you spit in in the same bar, but it's not as nice?
I came twice as hard as you be cummin, just ask your girl, she still can't get my jizz out her bum, and, if you think that's sick, you probably caught the flu
sorry nigga, I had to get closer so you would at least get half a clue
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Old 07-20-04, 12:41 PM   #7
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uppin dis for votes jus dis once.
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Old 07-20-04, 11:36 PM   #8
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any opinions?
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Old 07-20-04, 11:38 PM   #9
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its a lil too stretched cut back on the words on each line
and it'll be much better because pretty will reduce points for
stretched lines ya know but it was pretty good I was feeling
it a lil. and syllable wasn't all that even
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Old 07-21-04, 02:15 AM   #10
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yo, thanks for the feedback Forsaken I been waitin on someone to give me some all day. stay up, good lookin out.

where in Canada you stay? I'm in v-cover.
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