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Old 07-22-04, 06:24 PM   #1
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Question mock battle verse"opinions needed"

IP: 0D28 B715

this is my first attempt,i took 10 min


My words ta yours~im the sky your da floor~is the distance is clear,
Your swepped under the rug while im looked up to and reveared,

Your intelligence is waste of flesh like a “steak” in the ground,
Your neva renowned,my IQ’s so high its not a number it’s a sound,

A true “shithead” you personally kiss ass n greet turds every morning,
I emplore you not ta write, I pass out on “site”cuz ya spits are so boring,

My name is a preconception of the final outcome in this battle,
I DV8 from L’s,then Drain my Victims then 8 there shadows,

you’ll prolly come with a bad vocab, n played punches expecting a win,
but I “smoke”herbs for practice~ya words are wackness “high”n trippin,

me against you “you gotta be kidding”its like a pit..in a cage with a kitten,
im rppin, ya written’s ~blades through cloths~ya tourn like cheap linen,
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Old 07-22-04, 07:38 PM   #2
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lol pretty funny i see ya doin ya thing n keep doin it homie peep my shit on here help me wit feedback 8/10
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Old 07-22-04, 08:12 PM   #3
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this is good so keep it up!
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