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Old 08-05-04, 11:46 AM   #1
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The Invisible Man

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You just drank an experimental drug that morphs the human body, making it completely invisible. The potion only lasts 4 HOURS. So, you decide to make the most of your unique situation. Here's how my night would transpire:
(N.I.H. Laboratories in Bethesda, MD.)



It's about 8 on the dot..I take a sip of the brew..
After a couple of jolts..I'm just a whiff in the room..
I take a look in the mirror..I can't see my own self..
I'm amazed that it worked..so I grab my keys off the shelf..
Then hit the streets for a test..first, I walk down the AVE..
I can't resist the temptation..I smack this broad on the ass..
She spins around like "What the Ffff!?!"..but, I am the wind blown by..
My grin so wide, I die as she screams, "Oh my!"..
As I walk down the block..I see a robbery in progress..
Some con with a glock robbin' a Moms & Pops on Congress..
Place, I race in the store..still invisible to the eye..
It looks like a ghost scene the way random objects start to fly..
Then, youngin' must've got scared..he bolts out the store yellin'..
Poppin' off in the air..thinkin' twice of being a felon..
I decide to play a trick..my chick lives 2 blocks by bus..
I'll knock on the door then slip inside before she locks it up..
I knock and back up a step..then, to my utter surprise..
My girl isn't at the door..but my best-friend Jack Myers..
I am shocked and surprised..so much so i don't even budge..
"Who is it?" "No one baby." "Okay then, come back in the tub."..
I suddenly remember..my girl thinks I'm workin' late..
And my best-friend thinks my girl is a book that circulates..
It's 11:38..I stand there in disbelief..
Tryna ponder my next move..so, I decide revenge is sweet..
I knock on the door again..I can hear giggling, her and Jack..
My girl Trish' opens this time..so, I slip in behind her back..
There, on the couch is Jack..in a towel with no respect..
I rush over to the couch and grab this coward by the neck..
It's 11:58..to Trish, it looks like he's chokin'..
My grip constricts tight 'til this niggas lungs start explodin'..
It's 11:59..Trish just stands there out of shock..
Screamin', "Oh my God Jack!"..then Mr. Myers starts to drop..
The clock strikes 12 on the dot..I can feel my insides careen..
There, standing over Jack, Trish sees me fade into the scene..
I'm beaming a sly grin.."Surprise bitch, you fucked up now"..
"Who's a sucker?", I choke the bitch..2 dead bodies on the ground..

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Old 08-05-04, 11:57 AM   #2
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damn this was pretty cool... in the beginning the flow is off and the lines kind of suck but it gets better and better as the verse progresses. nice idea and good story, kinda disturbing, lol. good drop son
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Old 08-05-04, 12:00 PM   #3
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hmm pretty interesting story i liked 7/10 keep postin id do da same 2 but id shoot'em both...lol
after i fucked her 1 las time n got sum head from da slut...lmmao
than id shoot her off after i busted a nut in her booty.....lmmao
i kno im sick n crazy but dat wut i woulda done nice drop holla back peace..lol
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