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08-15-04, 03:31 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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1st track from Q on here: "Can't believe this shortie"
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/qakaprox.htm
^^^^^ Click on Can't Believe this shortie jus a short lil piece about feelin some youngin' Holla back...jus tryna elevate replied to: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141260 |
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08-15-04, 03:39 PM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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Yo Son Hot To Death The Beat Is Ill, The Delivery Is Nice Ya Voice Matches The Beat Overall 9/10.....whoa!!! I'm Being To Nice Lol....
Yo Peap My Spade Hood Joint
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08-15-04, 09:17 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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lol...don't know if it's that nice...but thanx for the feedback
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08-15-04, 09:26 PM
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Link isn't working
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08-15-04, 09:34 PM
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Ok goos track, beat was nice...flow was on point throughout...onlything was it seemed like u needed some doubles and echos in the begining but midway thru it picked up wit the addlibs and effects, so I'd say put some more addlibs and effects on first half of the track and it will be straight fiya cuz its already a 8/10 now
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08-15-04, 09:40 PM
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Sounded like your vocals were a little too loud for the beat. You might have wanted to raise the volume of the beat a little. Lyrics were nice. Flow wasn't bad. Voice sopunded like you lacked a little emotion. Sounded like you were just talking. Oh, one more thing......I thought you were....you know....opposite of straight. Or was that just a gag?
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08-15-04, 09:48 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRG...lol with this emotion thing...man, I felt I had emotion in it...dats just my voice...if I put more emotion in it, I'd be crying...LOL
and everyone on this board thinks I'm gay...so...what does it matter?...Peeps gonna have their opinions regardless of what I say... but...Preciate the feedback! |
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08-15-04, 10:02 PM
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By emotion....I just meant you sounded a little monotone....liven your voice up a bit. Oh....sorry about the gay thing if you ain't really gay. I just remember you having a thread "Straight From The Horse's Mouth......I'm Gay" in Lyricist Lounge
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08-16-04, 10:24 AM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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yea well...i'm workin on that
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08-16-04, 10:46 AM
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Hot drop, hot beat my only advice would be slow down just a little at the end. It seemed like you sped up your flow some towards the end. Nice drop, one of the better ive heard on this site in a minute.
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08-16-04, 12:02 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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^^^^ Word...I did speed my flow up. The 1st verse was written specifically for the beat. The 2nd verse was an open mic I wrote a while back I decided to use for it. So, I had to speed up my flow just to make it fit to the beat...
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08-16-04, 12:21 PM
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wasnt really feelin it...verse showed potential...but you went off wit ya flow...didnt seem like it fit the beat right...you need to work on ya delivery...the beat was tight...think you need a chorus in there...i think you need to work on ya shit a little more and this would be a better track
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08-16-04, 12:51 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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^^^ Well...to each his own...
uppin for more feed...oh, and there was a chorus in there 1 |
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08-16-04, 09:31 PM
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Vocals were beyond too loud...did u record the vocals and beat at the same time? cause thats what it sounds like...try recording ON the beat man..lol..
cool edit / any multi track software.... get at me on aim, u got some potential hur'. QuotableFlows .pz.
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08-17-04, 10:45 AM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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^^^^ Nah...I mix the vocals...I don't record beat and track at the same time...just a mistake...I'll know for next time
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