Just a song me and another guy made up. Please give opinon.

Chorus x2
no more beefin its time for squeezin and bleedin
no more frontin its time for pumpin and stuntin
we never bluff we've had enough
livin this life is tuff and you won't have to no more...no more...no more...

Verse 1 :

if you step on my toes, don't scuff my shoes.
i can only get pushed so far before you pay your dues.
im easy goin, shit ima nice guy
but if you tempt me, its gon be a drive by
and let me tell you its gon taste like sweet poontang pie
when your mothafuckin ass dies.
i don't wanna start no trouble
but if you shit on me, don't stumble or we'll rumble
i'll throw rubble in your eyes, bitch, dead. im derrty
kick ya till your cry's rich red y'heard me.
Cause you can only shove me so much
til you get tha chrome touch. i gotta a hunch
you gotcher bunch
and your plannin somethin big
think again kid, think about what we have done did
but youre goin down anyway, so why not in a blazy o' glory...
dawg we could do this anyday, this'll make a great war story...

Chorus 2x

Verse 2:

Fuck battlin Im on some real life shit
Duck quick cuz u niggas might get hit
United we stand, United we fall
so step on up if ya got the gall
campared ta me ya really really........ SMALL
I don't back down fron any kinda fight
doesn't matter the time.....Day or night
casue I put in da WORK ta get the job done
Ive master alot of rhymes... you haven't master one
Im right here in da East and ya runnin ta da west
jus remember when ya get there ta tell whos the best
send'em all back this way so I can putt'em ta rest
theres noone out there that can complete this test
so ya might as well jus stay at home ..in da bed
cause if ya keep steppin up ...ya could end up dead
ill be fillin ya up with lead.....form a #2 pencil
best keep dodgein to stay out the stincil
it doesn't matter to me which way ya go down
cause dead or alive ya leavein town........

Chorus 2x

Verse 3:

I got a full clip on my AK and I'm ready for action,
Cos Dc aint no motafuckin wack ass faction,
Cos we hittin rhymes all to the fullest,
Rainin down on your ass like my full clips bullets,
Puttin holes in your chest/Even if you got a vest,
Aint goin stop till you admit that we're the best,
We'll blow you off the atlas, to say the least,
Here on these streets like the mothafuckin middle-east,
I'll still fight anyone, though I dont need ta,
Dont go near me wit a gun, or Ill have ta beat ya,
Into a submission,
snipe you out when you and your girlfriend are kissin,
Dont mean to be rude, but I'll leave you both beheaded,
Everyone is scared of me so there like: 'Rat you just said it',
Thats what makes me sick/Niggaz droppin on my dick,
Tryin to piss me off just for a kick,
You'll get a kick/ And you'll get one up the ass,
Thats the kick that'll be your last,
And speakin of last, this is my last line,
So let us tell it to ya, one last time.

Chorus x2

Oh yeah DC is my group outside dis site (its on Kalistyle.com) but the site isnt workin so I thought Id post dis.

OK here I replied to In You but I still dont get dis.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142617