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Maku JaiiLiin 5 100.00%
Milk-E-Wae 0 0%
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Old 08-24-04, 07:18 PM   #1
Milk-E-Wae
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Milk-E-Wae vs Maku JaiiLiin

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Old 08-24-04, 07:22 PM   #2
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Maku JaiiLiin has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 07:22 PM.
 
Old 08-24-04, 07:30 PM   #3
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Milk-E-Wae has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 07:30 PM.
 
Old 08-24-04, 07:47 PM   #4
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i'll have this man backslapped till he lapse into coma//
kill him, and use seran wrap to trap the aroma//
let me have the pleasure, of blasting ya drastic measures, at rapping by battling with pistols packed 80 caliber, half the measure//*
This furious flame spitter is purely insane//
enough to burrow with needles in you, and leave urine in veins//
I got the conceptual techniques of a sculpter and painter//
you got the conceptual techniques of a woman in labor//**
You see the win ain't fo you to claim//
you gon get ate in this battle, like the candy brand you chose for a name//
You don't know bout pistols, your an obvious gun dummy//
I'm iller than the nigga you ducked, so you should probaly run from me//***

***he ducked a cat in a battle, didn't show up.
**a play on the word conceive, like how easy it is for an artist to come up with concepts, and the fact that a woman in labor needs help to conceive and it comes out messy in the end. you get it.
*a 40 cal=80 caliber half the measure.
 
Old 08-24-04, 07:48 PM   #5
Milk-E-Wae
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Milk-E-Wae is on a mission/which is, to get u dimenished/ dissmissed/without a witness/
just like OJ simpson did it/
ima throw u out of this battle like a bounca/
send u cryin to ur counsela/about how yo mom left wit outcha/
no1 gives a fuck wat u been through/
go cry to somebody else, boo who/
u aint on my level/i'm several levels better/
ha, u winnin this aint gonna happen, ever!/
u gonna need a magic jeanie just to beat me/
ur rappin timeline is decreasing, while mine is increasing/
better turn back now, while u still have a chanc of retreating/
 
Old 08-24-04, 07:52 PM   #6
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

give it 2 Maku his flow was better
he had sum personals 2 have harder punches
both of u need 2 change u structure
nice drops though
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Old 08-24-04, 08:08 PM   #7
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

Maku had better personals
so he got my vote both flows
were tight but Maku was better
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Old 08-25-04, 07:26 PM   #8
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uppin this one for votes..........................
 
Old 08-27-04, 06:15 PM   #9
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uppin 4 votes on this one.........................
 
Old 08-27-04, 06:41 PM   #10
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

maku in my opinion is the winner in this battle he was all around betta his punches his multi...pretty much everything was betta milk ya shit was iight but need a lil more.

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Old 08-28-04, 06:06 PM   #11
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uppin for votes on this one.......................
 
Old 08-28-04, 08:48 PM   #12
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

see i told you that you had lotas of potientail.....you came with hella heat....i remebver our battle i realy thought that i was gonna get beat...but you still gotta to work on oyur structure.....but other than that you came with some real heat...i dont need to go into detail about wat oyu did wrong becuz you no wat you doing....8/10

milk: you was killed from the begining you need to work on your structure and you need to work on oyu punches and for real you picked a bad name to battle poele with....see how ez it was for him to play off your name....but just work on getting better...5/10

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Old 08-28-04, 09:42 PM   #13
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

milk no real punches or disses flow was ok vocab can be improved here ok verse all toghther 4/10
maku good opener good ass wordplay and vocab got you this punches and disses can use work here but better then milks good ender personal 6/10
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