I'm probably not who you want replying to this, but too bad, I"m doing it anyway.

I figured out what it is with your voice that gets to me.....all your s's are very present. Not bad though.....lyrically. Quality was pretty good to, just not my kinda shit. I can tell you put a little time into this one and it payed off

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dude. I understand completely.
Most of the people here like the hardcore shit.

Not me. I make what I like. Not what everyone else likes u kno?
To many people tryna impress.....Thats not what Im here for.

People are into that Jay-Z kinda stuff....
I hate him....boring shit....Bone is like 10x better to me.
But it's all in preference. Thanks for the feedback. -1

WORD^^^i feel both of you on this, yo, carson, this was dope, because you have such a different style, i get the same shit for my style, some hate my hooks, some love them, but who cares right? well, its all in your heart, and as long as you appreciate it, who cares, anyways, this track was dope, nice flow, lyrically wise, your great, and you have the production down, except, can i hear you?? i mean really hear you, without anything, i want to hear you acapella, foreal, i know you have talent, i just want to hear you.....lmao, excuse my drunkennesssss

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so far so good man i like the ending of the first verse...

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I liked this one....

So I want more feedback Damnit.

to, thru, you, crew, who<---these were your rhyming words very very basic....really weak lyrically an I ain't saying that cuz u mentioned my name cuz you didn't even diss me...lol you just said my name but flow was nice, production was good but overdone..wtf is that sound u make in begginning?<----stop that seriously, its weird...delivery wasn't bad either you had good emotion seemed angry...so just next time you make a diss, rhyme words of more than 3 to 4 letters an throw a few punches in there an calm down a lil wit production an you'd have a solid diss but this wasn't bad at all.

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yea.. i like ur flow alot............


i want you to play with ur cool edit settings tho.. ur t's ,b's , p's , 'd, and s's are very present, and i think thats from vocalsomthing... i know which one u use tho.. yea.. hmm.. like all you hear is t,s,f,b,p, and shit.. and it makes us distracted from the song.. i like ya shit, but this is a lil over produced.. and you know how i am.. i wont lie .. but good job still.. ya prodeuction is hell;a good on most ya songs.. aight .. -1

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

Thanks guys....

also....I noticed this....
my surround sound system from my computer went down a day ago...
And I listend to my tracks on shitty speaker's and it really focused on the s's and t's. I hadn't noticed it before, because my surround sound has so much bass, but i think ima produce wit the shitty speaker's that way I can see how everyone else is gonna hear it. Not sayin u guys got shit, but my speaker's are like top notch shit. Thats what I think the problem is. -1

real good idea.. if I produce on my studio headphones and drop a track is sounds like shit on my comp.... probly same thing for you-- by some 10$ altec lansings

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gud stuff jet really liked ur delivery here....lyrically it was slightly basic i.e rhyming words...but i do like this, flow is real gud n i like the hook apart from the s's not feelin it but thats ur style n i respect that....like the part where ur doin the voice of someone duckin ya, the flu bit....lol

production was gud....listenin again n its really growin on me already...lol

nice drop

8/10

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that beat.... that shyt was dirty!!... omma holla at ya when i get back to da states... i wanna use that shyt for a track on SC!... first time i heard ya spit... not bad... delivered wit confidence.... i agree with trip, though... lots of simplicity in ya verse... but.... it worked for you on this joint... the beat is a great distraction... not saying ya verses were bad, just simple... good shyt... i'll holla