(hook, borrowed from Eminem's chorus from "Kim", re-worded)


lyrical infractions catch pain in words and action/
when culture satisfaction became a national subtraction/
laughin' at your brother from another mother coughing up blood/
thinking its a joke when he's scoffing with a shrug/
to your every piece of advice that finally ends with an uncompleted life/
a defeated knife lies in the street, never had to fight to enter our home/
once upon a time *BANG* now i'm all alone/

so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/
so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/

feel the pain, feel the rain of collected tears/
count the seconds of selected years given to kids these days/
when kids give in to freeways out this life, makin' death a relay/
i don't have enough breath to speak what i say, so i just dream it/
watch the world spin on a president's finger trying to reach it/
when i can't bleed its sorrow for the story... it begins and ends/
once upon a time *BANG* no one pretends/

so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/
so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/

i miss all the friends i've never had, i miss all the experience that i've never grabbed/
in another life, i'd wanna do this twice, just to feel what i'm feeling now/
never would i wanna be that kid with the car playing Eminem really loud/
or the next vanilla ice thinking that i'm feeling proud/
testing 1. 2. umm... 12, "can you feel me now?"/
i just washed the mirror with windex, "that's the real me... wow"/
i'm in my room filling up the chamber/
"i'm sorry world, i just want you to feel my anger"/
*BANG* 6 and 10 o' clock news, no more neighborhood stranger/

so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/
so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/
so long, *BANG* i thought i was so strong... i was so wrong, living in this world not about me/(fade)


signed,
~ProfessoR

nice piece kidd...hmm glad to see more peeps postin up in this area...much luv..God bless..always elevate...1.

to your every piece of advice that finally ends with an uncompleted life/

that was a hott bar hun..........it stuck out to me......kinda of a serious issue...n all.........but you pulled it off well............props...and peep mah peice below please........much luv........oh yea teh format was nice n even very nice

Dope ish babyboi,
flowed well ...
Diggin ya style!

Keep doin ur thang ...

Pz xXx DiMe
~1~