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12-07-04, 12:13 AM | #1 | |||||
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Thoughtz On Lockdown
IP: 0DA5 D7BF
aight this basically bout a nigga in jail and his thoughts on tha situation...i figured i'd show empathy for my niggaz thats locked up ya kno
Thoughtz On Lockdown I sit here staring at these blank four walls Feeling sorry for myself cuz I chose not to answer my opportunity calls All I can hear is the sound of my heart at night while my sprit falls Thinking how if I was still on the outside I could have had it all hearing the screams of men withdrawal symptomsfrom every which cell feeling the jelousy of my mind when I see a young cat released on bail wishing I had loveones to send me mail looking at my complection in which looks quite pale dreaming about my life and how it could have prevailed but ofcourse I kno that ship has sailed I feel as if im that lonely animal people come to see caged And they wonder why they go into a state of rage My head under construction my mind facing destruction once living life in the fast lanes I fell quickly into the luxurious suction im at war wit myself an internal conflict I blame the white man and my father for me being here constantly feeling sick But im hear to stay nothing to live for left My faith is whats keeping me alive I not choose death Pain is now what my future holds I think about it 24/7 But I plane to read, pray, and remain strong that’s my ticket to heaven lol shit jus came to me....i aint nevea been to jail .....im too sexi to go to jail lol ...holla at ya gurl
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12-07-04, 04:41 PM | #2 | ||||||||
mess with me get cooked
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IP: D981 8C7C
Aight
1.fix Your Struture Yo U Got Nice Emotions Add Some Meta'z In That Use Creativity....and Expand Your Image.....use Details....but Dont Stretch Cha Lines....... Chea I Think I Got An Female To Worry About Now Lol Chea Peace
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