Perception is mah weapon when neglected by redemption
Calmly caught curiosity wit innocent methods n incredible ethics
Mah halo has hastened mah honorable mention now I’m getting gods attention-
Screamin in mah dreams so it seems I’m worthy of better things
locked down in a world full of evil schemes-
I reconnect to mah inner being slap da shit out of mah heart for beating –
Lifes happiness can be deceiving –walk wit god?- I’m still breathing-
Caught creation by the center core being
Strangle it for conceiving.....
-Me-


Enemies line up n wait at da gates while I chew on mah fate n get comfort from hate
Corner stones of old bones lay steady in mah memories of old tombs filled wit rhymes dat jump off mah chest n become mah flesh
Trysts of tumultuous blood tastes drip by drip down mah lips
Lifes grip squeezed mah head tell it flipped---lucky me!!!! guess u got skipped-
Giggles of children drown out the pain tame tha disdain mah body has claimed
Smiles come but always fade-into demons wit a jaded daze
Wasted words wasted verbs will gods flock of careless children ever learn?
Rhymes redeam righteouness in the realm of the scrolls untold n forgotten –
Babies born lost souls and hopeless women plottin
Pointin fingers reflection lingers got u nervous wit what I’m sayin cus I’m realities eloquent speaker
Brain pans expand into lands of open fields n sadness yields so hearts can heal
Love is given like sleepin children –its serenity locked in moments of unity
Hiphop opened doors to a silent community wit more to say than the bible itself-wake up n represent yaself-god lives there – his words prepared in the blood of the people lost in worldly despair

i can see bein slept on hea--is gonna b a comon occurance---ima try uppin one time-then im out-


one-

this wasnt that bad the content was kinda dry, meaning wha was the reason i posted this. but the wordplay was off the hook. this is the first stuff iv seen u write and u had a mad internal rhyme scheme. stay up. peace.

joey

This was aight...Nothing jumped out at me...You had somenice lines here and there...But at some points you had me lost