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Old 02-10-05, 06:43 PM   #1
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This is from a topical battle im in....just lookin for some feed sonce ppl have slept on the battle...the topic was greed


Once upon an unusual day a man has somehow found his way
Relay it back to the day that he had no longer lived in dismay
He found himself impeading the spot to become one to lead
None could see that his actions deniably in itself was greed
Feeding off his intentions he had kept his secret unmentioned
His pension grows and leaves his old succesors suspended
dreaded the truth to his succesion he just boasted and gloated
His selfconfidence coasted causing him to make lies sugar coated
His executive poisition grew without preminitions from actions chose
Drove himself to new places, on the news he talked in captions closed
Facts arose about him and when confronted he froze with confusion
Using all he had he made the lie a proven fact from thoughts fusioned
His hopes showed contusions of when he pushed himself to the limit
Within minutes thoughts hinted away from work, became hard to finish
Trying to deminish and win this election to become a producer
Abuser of what had brought him succesion, slowly becomes a loser
Looser minded people saw that his reign wasnt going to last
With passed time he began to realize his dreams started to pass
Departed faster than what he expected and wont be resurrected
His misdirected intentions started his downfall within seconds
And during his succesion he was blinded by his imperfections
Which infected the direction of his wrongs into corrections
So before you try to score that top notch spot on top of it all
Just remember your greed is your seccessor as well as ur downfall
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