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Old 02-15-05, 10:14 PM   #1
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Socrates - I'm Here

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Super first trackness, but heh, I guess everyone was expecting it. Sounds like an old Carson track buuuuuut

www.soundclick.com/socratesakaphantom

Have fun bashing my textness.
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Old 02-15-05, 10:57 PM   #2
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your audio fuckin blows end of story sorry
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Old 02-15-05, 10:58 PM   #3
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soc...amn get a mic...you need a mic...........with otu a mic it sounds like shit

it just sounds muffled....cant understand your shit.....

sounds kinda commercial...style

you got to get into your flow...cant just read it you got to fucking spit with mad emotion....

man you got to spit with a mic stop with the head phones....

your lyrics seemed good but your flow was offf like a mother fucker..lol

damn b...i thought you was gonna be mad nice...lol

your next song should be alot better
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Old 02-15-05, 11:21 PM   #5
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I was using a mic I got from the 99 cent store and by the time THAT was recorded, I had done it like at least 20 times so I was kinda bored with it. But uh, word.
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Old 02-16-05, 06:19 AM   #6
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ROFL....damn...ya shit is HELLLLLLLLLLLLLA Distorted...i cant explain how distorted it is...damn....well...it does seem like u got a commercial ass flow....flow fell off in a couple spots...i couldnt really hear the lyrics so i cant tell u about that...
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Old 02-16-05, 07:04 AM   #7
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Omg Thats The Worst Quality I Ever Heard I Cant Understand Anything T Sounds As If You Got Good Flow But I Cant Her It You Gotta Have Someone Mix Ya Shit Sun
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Old 02-16-05, 08:11 AM   #8
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The flow sounds fine, but u NEED to buy a mic........ i dont even know wat was goin on........ i couldnt understand ONE word, i unno if thats cuz of the lo-fi, but that quality was horrible....
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Old 02-16-05, 02:37 PM   #9
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damn i cant stop laughing, that was the worst quality, no flowing wackest shit ive ever heard, it all makes sense now why you don't do audio. leave the site now while you have a little dignity, you wack fucker.
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he jsut screamed into his computer and thats what he got LMAO... ROFL.... stop spittin into ya USb port man, and buy a mic
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im better at audio than 1 of the so-called vets of RV, now aint that some shit ,lmao

j/p soc - ur probs dope wid the actual mic
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Old 02-16-05, 05:56 PM   #12
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only thing i heard in this was rapverse....lol

sounded like you we're spittin through one of those toliet paper rolls
while inside a bubble. lmao, no emotion at all, dont know bout your lyrics
couldnt hear shit, lmao, when it first started i was like wtf?
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see Soc....look at the feed...thats y i said...Text is easier then audio...and u said u didnt think so...heh...
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lol @ yo sc name, copyin' off mine. lol j/p

but damn quality, yo. But yo flow didn't sound that bad, yo. Emotion needs to be upped a lot. flow wasn't bad but still needs a LOT of improving. couldn't really judge lyrics. Shit was too distorted, yo. Need a new mic baldy.

but on the reel, for people sayin' he wack and that he needs to leave, seriously most people are like thois or even worse on first tries. How you gon expcet RV to be good in RV if you send off all the people who are tryin' it? stop hating and start helpin' out instead. I mean my first audio was prolly like this or even worse when I first tried, and now my shit ain't the best, but it's around average now, and I got more yrs to go to elevate, and I did that in less than a year.

so fo reel stop hating, everyone's first audio won't be great. I bet NOBODY does "good" on their first RV. I mean Triple_N is ill now, but I was coo wit him when he first started, and his first shit was wack, but look at him now. Dude ill. So to Soc, keep practicing man and get a new mic, shit will come wit time. And that is all. pc

oh, yea, props on droppin' feed on my track pc
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Old 02-16-05, 11:08 PM   #15
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all that i heard was......hot in the street...and poppin the heat...or something like that.....and i heard the word rapverse too....that was about it......yea your quality is officially the worst ever....in the history of music.....but that aside....your flow didnt seem all that bad...but it did seem off a little bit in some parts....delivery is definitely gonna need some elevating...but hey....it WAS a pretty decent beat......
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