Link: Hit Clean The Streets Pt 2

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listening...........

ur flow is consistent but falls off a lil...ur words seem to trail off a lil bit..lyrical content is good..quality is pretty gd...beat could have been better but it fits the subject matter

overall --> decent track..

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Word.. I'm feelin this shit man. Quality and articulation are your only real flaws.. Which means delivery could of been slightly better, but the track was dope and I was able to connect with your lyrics.. Like I said on aim, the bit at the end shouldnt of been repeated cause it sort of made you sound desperate for a deal which can give you a sellout image which I know isnt you.. Words are a powerful thing when it comes to the way people think.. But yeah..

I liked listening to this.. Good shit.

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I listened to this viamy stock system with the tweeters and sub turned off.

Message is good, I'm not gonna crit the beat selection since that's 100% opinion. Your flow was REALLY basic since it was repetative and 1syl for the entire song. I found my attention drifting on the track ater about 30 secs to be honest. An okay track, but some diversity in the deliv would have helped.

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arright pickin up from what dooms said, ur quality was pretty bad too, made some lines really hard to understand, i heard a bar or two that reall carried the story you were telling, but some switchups in the flow would have helped, but you did keep w/ the emotion of the beat and the story you were telling, keep droppin.11

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Thanks for the feed Seven i was talkin to Dooms and re-thinkin and a style switch may have worked but my aim for this WAS the story in question and i feel i have done well on this track because that IS the main thing people are picking up on...keep the feed comin

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^^yeah, but you gotta remember too, if someone's not interested in your track, they def won't be interested in the story. I could be talking about the true meaning of life, but if it sounded liek crap, no one would play it.

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Beat was straight...He hate accents but its cool.....flow was good but fell off most of the time....lyrivs were cool..emotion was good....delvivery was also good..I say try working with ya ccent other than that this was aiight

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nice intro... beat is good... story is good and lyrics are decent... flow is on point, but the quality isn't all that good... i like the part where it said u still stood your ground tht was tight... ryyt i think it kinda ruins it when it stops on the first verse maybe you shoulda put something else in there? overall this song is good i liked this alot keep droppin em...

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