Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good Luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-29-05 at 02:31 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

DA RIPPA has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 02:02 PM.

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 02:07 PM.

hey warm up
*ya mom sucking on my dick right now like it's hollow*
*and at the end of my free i'll tell you if she spits or swallow*


alright let do this here's my verse


Look compared to you I’m like king Author, you a amateur//
My flows are powerful, my mic is my Excalibur//
My flows killing you softly just lick the Fuji’s//
When I’m done fucking you up, I’ll let ya mama do me//


*Hey off the subjuct, a question, and tell me the truth*
*Do your gurl suck dick ass good as ya mom do*


Hell, I know your sista do she can swallow a hammer//
Oh my bad I forgot you gurl is your sister, now are you really from canada//
Gkilla will I’m a G so KILL ME//
PUSSY ASS CANADIAN you gonna have to show me//
g don't go tell momy what i said right now//
just give me 10 mo min to get my dick out of her mouth//


ha ha

hey gkilla she swallows

Da Rippa your whack, in fact I wont even try to reply…
I don’t even need to imply one punch to beat this guy…
Im on a higher level, like I was god and you the devil…
Grabbin’ a W from this is something you’ll never do…
Don’t know why you accepted you will never win…
Why you talking bout you hard, when you never sin…
I just want to finish this verse in less then 5 minutes…
Don’t need to put anything here and you still r finished…
This is the last line now, are you ready to get KO’d…
Your flow blowed, and your computer will explode…

Didn’t try, just a quick freestyle
Good luck man

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I hope you had fun with my mom, let the votin begin...

Prewrites are the shit, eh Rippa.

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Voted For: GKillaz05

*ya mom sucking on my dick right now like it's hollow*
*and at the end of my free i'll tell you if she spits or swallow*
eh........

Look compared to you I’m like king Author, you a amateur//
My flows are powerful, my mic is my Excalibur//
Nah, played...
My flows killing you softly just lick the Fuji’s//
When I’m done fucking you up, I’ll let ya mama do me//
No.......................
*Hey off the subjuct, a question, and tell me the truth*
*Do your gurl suck dick ass good as ya mom do*
You're digging yourself a grave.........
Hell, I know your sista do she can swallow a hammer//
Oh my bad I forgot you gurl is your sister, now are you really from canada//
doesn't even rhyme....
Gkilla will I’m a G so KILL ME//
PUSSY ASS CANADIAN you gonna have to show me//
no.............
g don't go tell momy what i said right now//
just give me 10 mo min to get my dick out of her mouth//
no.................

Da Rippa your whack, in fact I wont even try to reply…
I don’t even need to imply one punch to beat this guy…
OK.....
Im on a higher level, like I was god and you the devil…
Grabbin’ a W from this is something you’ll never do…
no.........
Don’t know why you accepted you will never win…
Why you talking bout you hard, when you never sin…
uh....no.....
I just want to finish this verse in less then 5 minutes…
Don’t need to put anything here and you still r finished…
same words, no.....
This is the last line now, are you ready to get KO’d…
Your flow blowed, and your computer will explode…
eh....ok.....

2 ok lines verses a bunch of played lines, really wasn't feeling the redundant mamma shit, if rippa had added more subject diversity, this would have been a better battle..

RTF

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Voted For: GKillaz05

g took this..he had way beta struc 4 a start,rippa u shud struc ya verse like g`s ya shits allover the place.

rippas verse was jus a bunch of self-glory & and meaningless statements...nothin hit.
killaz verse was aiight...nowt special, but like he said he easy had enough

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Voted For: DA RIPPA

BLAH!@dis battle......nobody should get a vote honestly

Da Breakdown:

GKillaz05
Da Rippa your whack, in fact I wont even try to reply…
I don’t even need to imply one punch to beat this guy…
ehhh...no
Im on a higher level, like I was god and you the devil…
Grabbin’ a W from this is something you’ll never do…
ehhh...no again
Don’t know why you accepted you will never win…
Why you talking bout you hard, when you never sin…
what does bein hard have 2 do wit sinnin??
I just want to finish this verse in less then 5 minutes…
Don’t need to put anything here and you still r finished…
REALLY?!?!?
This is the last line now, are you ready to get KO’d…
Your flow blowed, and your computer will explode…
......................

no personals, no punches, no metas, no multiz, no creativity, small amount of wordplay, no direct hits, bad opener, terrible closer, blah middle

Da Rippa
*ya mom sucking on my dick right now like it's hollow*
*and at the end of my free i'll tell you if she spits or swallow*
very wack!
Look compared to you I’m like king Author, you a amateur//
My flows are powerful, my mic is my Excalibur//
??????? and...
My flows killing you softly just lick the Fuji’s//
When I’m done fucking you up, I’ll let ya mama do me//
sooooo ur doin him rite now?? oooooook *smh*
*Hey off the subjuct, a question, and tell me the truth*
*Do your gurl suck dick ass good as ya mom do*
i'm sure u meant "AS" good as...but da line was trash
Hell, I know your sista do she can swallow a hammer//
Oh my bad I forgot you gurl is your sister, now are you really from canada//
get da fuck off da topic of his family members givin u head nigga.....dat shit is borin n not creative......old as hell

aight i wont waste time finishin ya shit cuz u did exceed da amount of bars u was suppose 2 drop.......10 << can u count??.......but both verses were worse than horrible, neitha had any creativity, good wordplay, nameplay, punches (there were none), metas, multiz, personals (rippa tried but da moms givin me brain shit is so worn out its ridiculous).......u based ya whole verse on gettin brain n fuckin his moms n girl.......were u hard when u wrote this verse??? u only gettin it cuz u at least tried 2 diss him....killaz jus said irrelevant shit

return da favor in one of my battles ONLY if u aint mad then try n vote against me cuz i said ya shit was wack, i'm only bein honest.....1ne

Voted For: GKillaz05

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Voted For: GKillaz05

Look compared to you I’m like king Author, you a amateur//
My flows are powerful, my mic is my Excalibur//
5/10not a very good opener
My flows killing you softly just lick the Fuji’s//
When I’m done fucking you up, I’ll let ya mama do me//
4/10...an herbish line


*Hey off the subjuct, a question, and tell me the truth*
*Do your gurl suck dick ass good as ya mom do*

haha, not

Hell, I know your sista do she can swallow a hammer//
Oh my bad I forgot you gurl is your sister, now are you really from canada//
4/10wow, gay punches
Gkilla will I’m a G so KILL ME//
PUSSY ASS CANADIAN you gonna have to show me//
5/10 2nd line was wack, and didnt rhyme well
g don't go tell momy what i said right now//
just give me 10 mo min to get my dick out of her mouth//
5/10 also bad closer

Da Rippa your whack, in fact I wont even try to reply…
I don’t even need to imply one punch to beat this guy…
6/10...decent opener
Im on a higher level, like I was god and you the devil…
Grabbin’ a W from this is something you’ll never do…
5/10, okay but not hard enuff
Don’t know why you accepted you will never win…
Why you talking bout you hard, when you never sin…
5/10...alright
I just want to finish this verse in less then 5 minutes…
Don’t need to put anything here and you still r finished…
5/10...decent
This is the last line now, are you ready to get KO’d…
Your flow blowed, and your computer will explode…
6/10...kinda goofy

yo da rippa plz elevate b4 tryin to go against sum1 like gkillaz05 and also stop usin momma jokes their gay, also u had sum fake personals that sucked, gkilla05 this was decent and you still ripped him thoguh it was a freestyle...da rippa improve on your structure punches werdplay and multies...gkilla05 improve on your multies and thats bout it since i cant really judge you on this cuz its a key

rtf in any link in sig

v/gkillaz05

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