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05-25-05, 09:41 AM | #1 | ||||
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Life and Love...Lyrical Prodigy w/ Keiandra
IP: 744C D310
Keiandra
Growing up I was the kind of outcast kid that no one likes Playing in areas around crack pipes, gunz and stolen bikes This is my life… Looking back I didn’t expect to find a relief from the hard times in this hard knock life Turning friendly conversation into…a nigga willing to make me his wife Since the beginning I've been around people who be thinking I'm no good But this brother was different…promised me the world…and a life outside my hood Damn…but I'm loving it hear...thinking he jus talking mad shit Till I'm laying with bullets in me…life on pause…that's when I get it Nigga's words was serious…tone in his voice told me he meant it He loving my daughter like she's his…like she started with OUR first kiss Yet things aint like they used to be…my fault…Damn, that's something I miss Both got drama but our hearts are staying connected Miles away but we both working to make imperfections perfected Never touched, never cuddled but we feel like we’ve done it all Got me weak in da knees like SWV…just from hearing his voice when he calls Lyrical Prodigy Analytically scrutinizing my numerous past congressions Amazed at the pain that ocured in synchronized repitition Summer of 2004, a new chapter in my life began Though I thought it would have less significance than a one night stand But change is inevitable, especially in time For she showed me real love which fortified my mind And in turn it seemed I was spiritually inclined To see the gift God sent from the heavens divine I love her more everyday like Ginuwine It's unbelievable the bond between our hearts...necromantically intertwined I haven't had the luxury of holdin her in my arms So I can only use my words and prayers to protect her from harm But like the saying goes "All good things must come to an end" Going from soulmates with real love to closer than close friends The love that we once shared hadn't faded Only the sweet simplicities of relationships had deteriorated Having discussions about finding what was lost...a love rekindled Unsure if yet again we're destined to be pricked on love's spindle We still find common ground, especially in our baby girl Deep down I wonder if it's enough when I promise her the world I guess it's an on going saga..."Love Lessons Learned" Finished reminiscing...noticing the scars from my heart being burned still a work in progress but leave ya feed. ~1~ |
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05-25-05, 02:12 PM | #2 | |||||
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wow, nice collab you two, you both captured your concepts well and kept up with the sync of it all, both had nice vocabulary, and told a story with your words,good emotion in this drop as well, keep it up both of you..1
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05-25-05, 02:25 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 744C D310
thnx...uppin.....
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05-29-05, 12:33 AM | #4 | ||||
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uppin...........
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05-29-05, 12:53 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
fluid stop being nice shit was trash this isnt a poetic piece its a open mic stop trying to post shit everywhere to get more views vocab was weak emotion was lacking as was imagery flow was a lil off as well this was trash overall 2/10
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