5 quick bars:

Come see my boyz if ya think ya block tougher/
Cause in my hood we Move- E , like Blockbuster/
U wanna battle me is that yo word, u trippin/
Cause I'm nice around mics, word to Pippen/
With the punchlines I mash u lames/
Cause the kid got more wordplay than Scrabble games/
Cause y'all know who the hardest is/
I'm like a freight train, I'm sick boy, I spit more, than a bus full of retarded kids/
If y'all want success y'all better stay out my way and be easy though/
Cause I can make y'all sit-com, like a TV show/
EASY

Explanation:
+ Sit-com = sit calm
--when I said I'll make' em sit-com, I meant sit calm but I had to break the word up to make it make sense. Most TV shows are sitcoms.

ur first bar was prob your only descent one in there. I know it's quick bars but i'm just telling your what i think about them. Your closer was weak, i mean i didn't even get the whole sit-com, how do you make someone sit-com? Keep up though, return the favor

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pretty good nice word play rhymes were good flow was ehhh structre was fucked up but other then that it was nice good job homie
6/10

keep the ink on the page man

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Good lookin on the feedback. If y'all like it or not I just wanna know what y'all think.

this was ok, as The Militant said your structure was off pretty bad, flow was decent, word play was good though....the / are not necessary, makes it even harder to read, again decent drop, keep it up

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Good lookin on the feedback

It was nice but not really original. U beat me. But u can't beat again. That's my word


Back to the rhyme: I give it an 8/10. THe punchlines were crazy but I heard similar ones before..




8/10

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