Battle Rules:

8-10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-23-05 at 12:08 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

!Impact! has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 12:43 AM.

If women are from venus and men are from mars youd be from ur 'anus' the way you spit bars..
SO the only thing left is god for this cat//HOpe you know im to hard for this cat//im'a win coz im to smart for this cat//
Exelence is ma presents:: never tens:: never hesitate ::leave this fool bent real quick real sick:
I can tell by yah name when yah in the wrong place.. when yah in the wrong game..
and your ryhmes are lame//.. and you sound all the same//

that was shit...

i did that one half asleep!!! youl probs beet me

VISION has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 05:23 PM.

That verse had me laughin out loud
cause it was whack kid./
If rap had an opposite, YO
it would be that s##t.//
your a newby steppin to me & you be
lackin tactics./
If skill was a disease in the breeze
you couldn't catch it.//
Gettin served by everybody
from YOUNG BLAZE to WES CITY./
so dumb you wouldn't win one if
you were on the commity.//
K-TRINI knocked you out
now VISION'S pullin your card./
and it's an L .. to start your name wit cause
that's all that you are.//
You ain't hard, In fact you're the
definition of softness./
the only thing that you impact is
your record of losses.//

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all votes r much appreciated.
thanx yall......
check out this battle.....Blackfrostbite vs Vision.
much love.
if you post a link I'll hit that s##t up yo,

100

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Voted For: VISION

great line: "SO the only thing left is god for this cat//HOpe you know im to hard for this cat//im'a win coz im to smart for this cat//"-- great use of parallism most texters don't know how to this right. . only problem i have with it is that it sounds very familar . . . . . . vote goes to vision . . . more creative . . better punches. . . but honestly VISION it wasn't that great of a drop seriously no HATE up ur game . . but u did enuff for the win

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff

Voted For: VISION

easy win for vision

better punches and personals

impact work on your structure punches personals everything
batlle was one sidded

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Voted For: VISION

Vision got this.......... i dont know if i really needa explain this vote but even Impact sed his verse was "shit"

I mean, wth is that closer dude????? u just sound like u quit at the end, u started off with an ok bar and that was about it...... i dont even know if u met the line limit..... Vision had some played lines but they would beat that Impact verse anyways..... u last two bars were actually pretty decent Vision, and u look like u have a chance to be good, but no on e will take u seriousl with that structure man.... take out the "//" and put one line ON one line.... none of that skippin around shit

V/Vision

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