heres the links i left feedback on http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2596359

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218354



tell me if iv improved since the last drop iv had n all i enjoyed doin this the most of ne verse i ever did this just came right to me as soon as i woke up the other day just got done copleting it tlel me what u think chea!!

{VERSE}

I got haters throwing left and right jabs at me
iv taken all the disses n reatliatin just as i should be
bitches no longer steppin up now who wants to battle me!?
deep thoughts in my mind now im laying out my strategy
im never gon change for nobody why cant you see!?
haters just keep spraying cuz its bringing out the best of me
spittin theese lyrics that be comin from deep in my spirit
i only spray what i feel even if you dont wanna hear it
i always spit the truth in my verse from every word to lyric
making it look as im name branded im leavin yall looking generic
remeniscing and putting it all onto every single thing that i write
you can send ya disses but ill blow em right back harder on tha mic
even tho i say it doesnt bother me this shits still effecting me
i wont stop spraying this shit untill people start respecting me
iv heard bitches saying the shit i spray is demented and mostly crucial
but im here to lay down the law and tell you everything i spray is truthful