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Old 02-11-06, 12:44 PM   #1
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Old 02-11-06, 12:53 PM   #2
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To tell u the truth. This type of thing really ain't my style. But Everyone is different and unique in their artistry. I like the hook. 2nd dude needs to be dropped off the trakk tho. He sound he a nervous type of paranoid rapper. like he bout to have anxiety attack. lol fux, u got da best verse. u more my style. once i hear the beginnin of ur verse it makes me wanna listen to the whole thing. ur the best on dat track. and da hook is fiyah. not really feelin the beat tho. I give it a 8/10. Stay up and keep doin ya thang homeboi.
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Old 02-11-06, 07:51 PM   #3
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Old 02-12-06, 06:43 AM   #4
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Your Flows The Best On This,Feelin Ya Delivery And ya Presence Is Koo,Emotions koo,lyrics are proly best as well


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Old 02-12-06, 05:33 PM   #5
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this was really bass heavy... I usually like alot a bass... but didn't like the beat though...
1st guy flow sounded fairly polished... didn't here any real stand alone lines...
2nd guy had a nice flow too, not sure if his voice really sounded right on this... sounds madd young... liked the way he slowed down and sped back up repeatedly... 3rd guy had a decent flow to, like the way to strung out girrrrl came out pretty decent... this was actually a pretty decent track but like Knucks said just not my cup of tea... I don't generally listen to club styled music much... but it serves its purpose

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Old 02-13-06, 12:21 AM   #6
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Not my kinda song, but here we go.

First guy, ok. Flow is good, lyrics are fine, overall a solid verse. Nothing that stands out though.

Second, quality is ok, not as good as 1st, flow and all is good. Still nothing standing out that much.

Third, emotion is eh, quality is good, flow is good, overall a solid track as well.

This song is fine, it's just another song. Nothing new or different.
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Old 02-14-06, 08:42 AM   #7
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Hook - it's strate, gets da purpose done.........

1st MC- rides beat well, quality could be upped, lyrics are strate, delivery is the best out of all the otha categories...

2nd MC- a different type of flow, not really feelin his style....

3rd MC- tha best out of all 3 MCs, delivery is strate, and he's got that "crispy" quality...lyrics are strate.....

Overall Decent Club track minus the second cat.....

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Old 02-16-06, 10:24 PM   #8
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beat:7.5
flow:6
hook:7
enjoyment:6

it waz coo.....the delivery couldve been better.....but i like the lyricz and ish...just need to deliver them better.....especially in the first 2 verses
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Old 02-17-06, 11:27 PM   #9
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werddddddddddddd......... my delivery was decent on this one i think
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