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Lol...Are u serious....Mim u got me Batteling this Ni99a?
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WTF?..tha White Girl Lova From dont be a Menace?

I can Take u Out in a Ko.....or a 7-1 Count..Which 1 ya Chick Want?
Dont Front Im Merkin u "Alvin" then askin for the rest of tha ChipMunks


This UglyMuthafucka A trailer Park Luva....This Right here an Easy Win
Punches & Talent?....lol...Nah
Only thing Rob Brung to this Battle.. was them Herpes off his Bitch Chin
Lets see if u can Button Up this Win instead of that Shirt...That i Doubt
.....Wait before you answer that Rob....take the Chicklets out ya Mouth
Come On man to Be Real... what type of Real Ni99a Wanna Tag a Fiend
Obviously u Only Stick 2 your "Essence" ....when Jizzin on tha Magazine
Next Time ima Charge you a Fee 2 Battle Me....1 vote would b ya Dream
U gone Need more than 3 2 Defeat Me
that 2 would be a Dream ....seeing how you tha only "One" on ya "Team"


And Im still Rusty.....

*Nuff Said*



If u dont get sumtin..Hit me Up b4 u Vote

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(line1)this kid bringin in props and he think he gone win?
(line2)but he still worse than that guy Skitzo when he battled Jin...
dayuuuuuuuuum. RRRRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFLLLLLLLLL LL
yea son, i bring that fire. *bladayow bladayow* *gunfire ensues*
check it out ni99a!

mim why u got me battlin the black man lover from friday after next?

easy win right here, cuz its in front of my face
and u prolly like men.... the pics in front of my FACE
*EXPLANATIONS: you prolly didnt knwo, troop is the one in the middle*
yo yo, i'll kill you with a gun. i bring the heater.....
and i like "white girls" and stuff... you can call it "jungle fever"
*oooh, SUPER WORDPLAY. the guy in the picture i posted was in the movie white girls... isnt that like a triple word score or something?*
yo yo, microphone examination. yo, yo
you're a big fag, you're a big drag, he watches baywatch just to see their six packs
mister get back, mister relax, im gonna have a threesome when your sister gets back
^if U'z diddnt get sumptin, hit me up b4 u vote. they're's beez persunalz in dere son.
so 1, 2, buckle my shoe, 3, 4, troop is a whore
..... yo yo.... he dont even want no more son.
yo man, what yo fat azz want some more pumpkin piE? you be prolly tryin to kiss that pumpkin too. cuz you gay. oooh ooh, i got it. i got it. im gonna say somethin about tha Q right here... and then you'll think it was a really good line bc it was original and stuff... ooh watch this,
yo yo... sUNn... y0 yO, you prolly think thaat my name TeamOne is TeamTwo.
and you polly also be suckin dick and having sex with tha Q... as well


yo man, this ni99a troop is a n00b and ima pwn him.

yo yo, he dont even stick to his "jet" .... even when he gets "glue" on the magazine cover and a few of the pages on the inside too and probably on the back cover
... and he's a man lover
-Lv. 5 Bitches

up over noshows.

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Ummmm...wtf is up with TeamOne's style? Commenting on lines after he posted them...It was hard for me to tell what his actual "lines" were. The structure was just confusing...so I'm gonna vote for Troop on this one.

vote - Troop

I have to agree... I saw some punches but they were weak and shit. The structure you used was horrid, and the fact that you had to explain so much and that you did it between bars is an excuse in itself for me to slap you. The style was newbish, some of the punches were just too plain and shitty... they need better wording and what decent parts you had in your verse had to be found like a needle in a haystack. Troop on the other hand had a couple of decent punches, personals were there although they could be better. But, at least he had a style that was readable and did not have to explain all his shit.. Overall he had a better verse and so he gets the win.

V/ - TROOP

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yall do know hhe was bullshittin right?

hahahah, absolutely nobody got the joke....... lmfao, this is why we need 9th to come in here and vote

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

i know right... NOBODY realized that i was joking... i guess the verse wasnt bad enough... dayum. i mean, this shit is CLEARLY a joke tho

Why would u lose on purpose?

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you'll see..........