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Old 10-15-06, 11:11 AM   #1
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7. Te Ora (3-1) vs 8. Sonny Dimebags (11-6)

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Old 10-15-06, 11:56 PM   #2
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Old 10-19-06, 04:41 AM   #3
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where's this fool @?





ur favoured to win, but it's a labourus thing.. i'ma wreck him
but i do think u Gon' Murk - cause ur a gay fuck who doesn't check in
u'll probably show at the last second.. but dude ur style is wrong
just bitch moves..... the hell away from u when u try it on
cause girls always reject u.. ur a problem wit this rap shit
but u'll be rectify even try.. so you better step back bitch
i'm here to drown ur career.. and son the longer u take
jus means the longer i think, whether to leave u in the ponder the lake
u support an improving team.. but i cut multiple bitches in clout
the 2006 Knicks are better..? hopefully soon ur stitches are out
u'll never lead in the votes.. it's clear i'll wreck this fake
last time sonny side up..... was eggs on my breakfast plate
i drop flames and can go for acres.. real fly, i blast more
i'll leave u burnt orchard - cause homie i'm pastures

u ain't even checked in so i jus went 14.
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Old 10-20-06, 12:02 AM   #4
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Ight im in

yooo very busy weeek had to move my computer and old settup andbeen work 24/7 I will have my 14 bars posted early im juss to tired and wanna pass out now
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Old 10-20-06, 05:00 AM   #5
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ight, that's fair enough.. drop 2morrow.
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Old 10-20-06, 11:56 AM   #6
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Upping for Sonny.
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Old 10-20-06, 12:07 PM   #7
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Good shit on my opponents behalf
Let's do this
Yo,Im'a carve this cats pumpkin,im in a Halloween mood
then put a candle in his skull,finally a bright light for this dude
Nah foreal this cat is nice man, Sonny shows him some respect
couldn't go on stage after him..cuz everyone dipped durin his set
Shittin on you is something I enjoy,Ill beat you and ya whole group
Smash this kids ass old paperboy style, I'll give him da quick scoop
It's cool I'll hand Te his b-day and christmas gifts, after I rip his skin
Because he's gonna have to miss them days, from da coma he's in
Fuck this herb's rhymes, he dont belong in this game,wit that shit
his flow wouldn't be out this world,if he spit as his first name flipped
Can't fuck wit dis pimp,the way I sex up tricks is pure an intense
last time Te hit a chick from the back, he had to swap insurance
So I'm sayin this cat not on Sonny's level,he aint even a problem
Te did burn a Dime once tho.... cuz he wasnt wearing a condom
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Old 10-20-06, 04:56 PM   #8
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i'm here to drown ur career.. and son the longer u take
jus means the longer i think, whether to leave u in the ponder the lake

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Shittin on you is something I enjoy,Ill beat you and ya whole group
Smash this kids ass old paperboy style, I'll give him da quick scoop
It's cool I'll hand Te his b-day and christmas gifts, after I rip his skin
Because he's gonna have to miss them days, from da coma he's in
So I'm sayin this cat not on Sonny's level,he aint even a problem
Te did burn a Dime once tho.... cuz he wasnt wearing a condom

V/sunny came wit harder hittin punchs his verse was more consisten..te had that one line that was good but you feel off in most parts of ya verse
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Old 10-20-06, 05:04 PM   #9
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0-1..

there's only 2 battles ready for votes so we should be able to get some.
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Old 10-20-06, 05:23 PM   #10
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ur favoured to win, but it's a labourus thing.. i'ma wreck him
but i do think u Gon' Murk - cause ur a gay fuck who doesn't check in
...Weak....
u'll probably show at the last second.. but dude ur style is wrong
just bitch moves..... the hell away from u when u try it on
....Weak......
cause girls always reject u.. ur a problem wit this rap shit
but u'll be rectify even try.. so you better step back bitch
...Aii....
i'm here to drown ur career.. and son the longer u take
jus means the longer i think, whether to leave u in the ponder the lake
...Wtf?.....Weak...
u support an improving team.. but i cut multiple bitches in clout
the 2006 Knicks are better..? hopefully soon ur stitches are out
....Weak...
u'll never lead in the votes.. it's clear i'll wreck this fake
last time sonny side up..... was eggs on my breakfast plate
.....Played...
i drop flames and can go for acres.. real fly, i blast more
i'll leave u burnt orchard - cause homie i'm pastures
....Aii...

Overall man You Came very weak and played your wording was terrible and your lines were somewhat to Thought into to the point where you mixed your wording So .....Yeah You know

Yo,Im'a carve this cats pumpkin,im in a Halloween mood
then put a candle in his skull,finally a bright light for this dude
.....aii.....
Nah foreal this cat is nice man, Sonny shows him some respect
couldn't go on stage after him..cuz everyone dipped durin his set
...lol...Decent...
Shittin on you is something I enjoy,Ill beat you and ya whole group
Smash this kids ass old paperboy style, I'll give him da quick scoop
....Decent....
It's cool I'll hand Te his b-day and christmas gifts, after I rip his skin
Because he's gonna have to miss them days, from da coma he's in
......Blah....
Fuck this herb's rhymes, he dont belong in this game,wit that shit
his flow wouldn't be out this world,if he spit as his first name flipped
...Nice..........
Can't fuck wit dis pimp,the way I sex up tricks is pure an intense
last time Te hit a chick from the back, he had to swap insurance
....Lol aii..
So I'm sayin this cat not on Sonny's level,he aint even a problem
Te did burn a Dime once tho.... cuz he wasnt wearing a condom
...........

Overall Your verse hit better than Te's and I dont think I have to go into details everybody can see that

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Old 10-21-06, 11:23 AM   #11
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ur favoured to win, but it's a labourus thing.. i'ma wreck him
but i do think u Gon' Murk - cause ur a gay fuck who doesn't check in
i'm here to drown ur career.. and son the longer u take
jus means the longer i think, whether to leave u in the ponder the lake

vs.

Nah foreal this cat is nice man, Sonny shows him some respect
couldn't go on stage after him..cuz everyone dipped durin his set
Can't fuck wit dis pimp,the way I sex up tricks is pure an intense
last time Te hit a chick from the back, he had to swap insurance

Hmm, tied in quotables here. Te Ora, looked like you didn't think ur opponent would show. Sometimes thats a fair assumption, but Sonny often doesn't check in so ya should have checked his past battles to see that. Really a tough break for ya. Anyway, Gon Murk and ponder wordplay was pretty cool, hadn't seen that before. The rest was kinda played tho. Bitch moves, rectify, pastures... yea, seen those all a few times. I still like ur work, but this wasn't one of your better verses.

Sonny, only 2 quotables, but a decent verse, a bunch of lines were close to quotable. I liked the set line, lol, that was pretty fresh. Hit from the back was coo too. The ET and paperboy style lines weren't bad either, just felt they weren't good enough to quote. Good effort from ya, I think ya barely edged this for the consistency and comin' a little less played.

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Old 10-21-06, 12:43 PM   #12
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Te ORA


i'm here to drown ur career.. and son the longer u take
jus means the longer i think, whether to leave u in the ponder the lake
u support an improving team.. but i cut multiple bitches in clout
the 2006 Knicks are better..? hopefully soon ur stitches are out

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sonny dimebags

Nah foreal this cat is nice man, Sonny shows him some respect
couldn't go on stage after him..cuz everyone dipped durin his set

Fuck this herb's rhymes, he dont belong in this game,wit that shit
his flow wouldn't be out this world,if he spit as his first name flipped
Can't fuck wit dis pimp,the way I sex up tricks is pure an intense
last time Te hit a chick from the back, he had to swap insurance


sonny always comes pretty fresh every week...every week he drops a line thats always like damm nice...but at first when te ora dropped i thought he would take this...but then sonny dropped a pretty hott verse...that car insurance line n ET line...n even the burn dimes line was cool...te ora had the pond or lake line i like...but sonny had way more quotables

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Old 10-21-06, 06:02 PM   #13
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ur favoured to win, but it's a labourus thing.. i'ma wreck him
but i do think u Gon' Murk - cause ur a gay fuck who doesn't check in
i'm here to drown ur career.. and son the longer u take
jus means the longer i think, whether to leave u in the ponder the lake

vs.

Nah foreal this cat is nice man, Sonny shows him some respect
couldn't go on stage after him..cuz everyone dipped durin his set
Can't fuck wit dis pimp,the way I sex up tricks is pure an intense
last time Te hit a chick from the back, he had to swap insurance


the first name flipped line was almost quoted

so IMO sonny got this


V/sonny


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Old 10-21-06, 10:44 PM   #14
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Ora came pretty played. You had some ptential concepts but your wording is offff. Sonny's verse wasnt that special but it didnt need to be cuz IMO he still easily one this.

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Old 10-22-06, 01:09 AM   #15
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