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Old 12-31-06, 10:40 AM   #1
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9. Wordz Ahgod (3-1) vs. 10. Comedian (10-2)

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Old 12-31-06, 04:12 PM   #3
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sup com...yeah...around there sounds good. who ever drops first. g'luck man.
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Old 01-05-07, 12:49 AM   #4
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it's useless to write keys cause you're losing this fight, see
it's said haste makes waste and you're moving at light speed
i'm destroying his text career and am making his world end
Wordz' ego is so inflated; but at least it matches his girlfriend
I'm a mastermind & damage lies when i slam his rhymes
God? More like his priest... cause it's obvious you're pastor prime
get your raps in line, you scared of heights, kid's beat clown
your future is grave... when you take the fall of six feet down
you're active in the Elevation thread, looking for aid to win
your bones are looking sort'a new to text... so i'll break them in
i've got him hating this when i whore and fade him quick
you're Ahgod? it's doesn't matter, the whole board is athiest
rape this kid, you're just amounting another dumb loss
your record is now 3-2, counting down to my number 1 spot
we're similar, but you ain't hot as me, your raps a bore
i got a polished steeze... while i just used you to wax the floor
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Old 01-05-07, 07:22 AM   #5
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Im a need an extension please...
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Old 01-05-07, 12:14 PM   #6
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Sure...

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Old 01-05-07, 03:34 PM   #7
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ay lets go dawgy...

This fag??? I'll burn n kill em, this nigga will not flirt with women
Coz Com going for 16?? I doubt it...unless that perv Serb is with em'
yeah, ask ur mom if its true, I attach a bomb on this fags wackest song
His girls like a website...She'd rather have .'s before she'd interact with com
I expected jokes from the get go, son kills this fucking board *dead*
Coz last time he did stand up.....
......He got the crowed to do it with em---->right before they all left
This fags just false ...no vet, just a joke with old lines
Even russle simmons agrees --->that we'll never see Co-signed
Coz this bitch can Come'di-an any place chosen like the golden child
ur old n foul...we know your styles been broken down...
.....So I look at Comedian and just reach for a coke n a smile ( :
Coz ur a fag, with rainbow colors n elton jon shades
N' 10-2 aint ur record...Its how many feet n inches we dug ur grave
I murder him n the spouse in a museum...thats how I display affection
Coz This geek needs a better job with waiges to help pay attencion
Ur brains defective, I'll powerdrive u till Hell wrecked
Coz ur 10-2 is impressive...Unless u realize he hasn't touched a belt YET!!!

Sorry it took so long...things came up

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Old 01-05-07, 04:30 PM   #8
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I'm a mastermind & damage lies when i slam his rhymes
God? More like his priest... cause it's obvious you're pastor prime
DECENT, SET UP COULD BE BETTER AND HAVE SOME RELEVENCE TO THE PUNCH BUT STILL DECENT
you're active in the Elevation thread, looking for aid to win
your bones are looking sort'a new to text... so i'll break them in
NICE PERSONAL JAB AT HIM

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This fags just false ...no vet, just a joke with old lines
Even russle simmons agrees --->that we'll never see Co-signed
THIS WAS ALRIGHT
Ur brains defective, I'll powerdrive u till Hell wrecked
Coz ur 10-2 is impressive...Unless u realize he hasn't touched a belt YET!!!
GOOD FINSHER YOU NEEDED THAT

Vote:COMEDIAN

You guys came way weaker than I thought. Both of your nameplays to the other Person was mostly all Played. I didn’t like either person’s grave lines either. I think I'ma Have to say Com got it instead of voting tie only cause I Thought Both his quotes were atleast Decent where as Words Had 2 quotes too but the Russle Simons one was Just a lil weaker Than the Pastor Line. Oh...And Don't do one of these--> (:
Happy face things after a bar again cause that's exstremely gay to me in a battle situation.
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Old 01-05-07, 05:29 PM   #9
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word...I shouldn't have drop'd last minute like this...oh well..let me hit the cyphers now lol..
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Old 01-05-07, 06:12 PM   #10
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i've got him hating this when i whore and fade him quick
you're Ahgod? it's doesn't matter, the whole board is athiest

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yeah, ask ur mom if its true, I attach a bomb on this fags wackest song
His girls like a website...She'd rather have .'s before she'd interact with com

Yeah basically this battle was pretty weak, but Wordz took it with more consistency with the light jabs. Neither had very good wording and this was a very lazy battle, but Wordz took it with more consistency.

Pastor/Pasteur Prime has been used loads of times before. If you look in my legendary battle against Mimesis and 9th Degree I actually ripped 9th Degree for using a Pasteur/Past your Prime line when Fracture had used a really similar one before. This was about New Years last year. Comedian your wording wasn't bad but I've seen a lot of your concepts used many times before, like the grave day line was used by Sylentz, Past Your Prime was used by Fracure and 9th Degree and Spitacular used a bones/break them in line.

V/ Wordz Aghod

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Old 01-05-07, 06:34 PM   #11
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Old 01-05-07, 06:38 PM   #12
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Quote:
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lmao, you DO know what a pastor is, right? It is in no way the same as the word "pasture", definition-wise.

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I go to an evangelical church, of course I know what a pastor is. And you're trying to flip them both on the same words (past your) therefore they're the same. An o instead of eu doesn't make any difference.
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Old 01-05-07, 06:52 PM   #13
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Old 01-05-07, 07:15 PM   #14
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it's useless to write keys cause you're losing this fight, see
it's said haste makes waste and you're moving at light speed
i'm destroying his text career and am making his world end
Wordz' ego is so inflated; but at least it matches his girlfriend
I'm a mastermind & damage lies when i slam his rhymes
God? More like his priest... cause it's obvious you're pastor prime
you're active in the Elevation thread, looking for aid to win
your bones are looking sort'a new to text... so i'll break them in

vs.

yeah, ask ur mom if its true, I attach a bomb on this fags wackest song
His girls like a website...She'd rather have .'s before she'd interact with com
I expected jokes from the get go, son kills this fucking board *dead*
Coz last time he did stand up.....
......He got the crowed to do it with em---->right before they all left
This fags just false ...no vet, just a joke with old lines
Even russle simmons agrees --->that we'll never see Co-signed
Ur brains defective, I'll powerdrive u till Hell wrecked
Coz ur 10-2 is impressive...Unless u realize he hasn't touched a belt YET!!!


Pretty good battle, Comedian wasn't that creative with some of his punches. I was feeling InDeath's lines more.

V/ InDeath
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Old 01-06-07, 12:05 AM   #15
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