..Chris is back.
n' he writes..


..gota be some reason I'm not dead..devil must had sent me back
......to do what I do..
yo..
..I walked into a home for the blind stole sunglass n stared in eyes
N' stole some rollerblades stuck em on a guy who was paralyzed
I'll spare the wise..the pain of a slow death haunts the minds
A taunt implys....nothin at all jus a trick to stomp ya sides
I was perched ontop a oak waitin with a sharpened pole to inflict pain
the dog was barkin up the wrong tree so I speared it in the rib cage
jumped down and wanted half its knowledge so I took a knife n split brain
my hits vein, n' everything I writ's game..I'm insane and crazy
you tell a joke..I cut myself..why not kill you? na I'm in pain and lazy
Na you no I'm not serious, I'd probably toss a propane tank at you
wait for you to catch it and shoot it with my nine to spray fire n gas you
I'll spray myself with a extinguisher jus for the rush of tryin to save you
Then run past your burnin body with a fire blanket to laugh n mame you
Bust my teeth wit a tire iron, when they find our ashes can't name two
I'll enslave your pets with un-ethical behavior na you know im trickin now
this guy ain't gay just when a babe comes he's got hands out dick down
a bitch clown, savy for dick I'll rip your tits off hollow em n make a hat
leave your fate in tact, toss paint all over your body till ur painted black
slaughtered a rabbit for fun..yea remember the fact cuz it shys from funny
but its part of my plan..grab a drum n paint it..call me the energizer bunny
y does no body love me?..who cares Im hate ful n twisted, jus stuck up
I am surrounded by death..I got a canary with just legs..screamin STFU!
I'm hateful to hero's..I'm a bitch to of an opponent..the throttle is thicker
push it til I can't b stoped,went to a homeless guy, took his bottle a liquor
drank it all n' as he watched curiously I smiled..smahsed it on his face
I'm lost in this world I'm always gunnin see..
I went to national track meet with glock nine screamin..
WHY YOU RUNNIN FROM MEE!!!...

Brraattt Braatttt..*gun shots n screams*...


My Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3155422
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3155428

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Fear

yo i waz feelin this man, consistent wit tha style and sum nice multiz but ya need to step them up a bit man, sum horrorcore shit in there, i used to do a lotta that stuff on tha txt battle scene....... good stuff man..... i liked tha story too.. keep spittin

yeah liked the story, and got good flow. good shit man

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What Up Gangsta?

i think it would ok in the begining but then it started to get dumb especially when you said
:"this guy ain't gay just when a babe comes he's got hands out dick down
a bitch clown, savy for dick I'll rip your tits off hollow em n make a hat"


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3157044

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Fear

haha shit was funny i liked it....good multis to....8/10

favorite lines-
the dog was barkin up the wrong tree so I speared it in the rib cage
jumped down and wanted half its knowledge so I took a knife n split brain

Na you no I'm not serious, I'd probably toss a propane tank at you
wait for you to catch it and shoot it with my nine to spray fire n gas you
I'll spray myself with a extinguisher jus for the rush of tryin to save you
Then run past your burnin body with a fire blanket to laugh n mame you

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Fear

The multis were good, the lines were original, but the style wasn't. It seemed really eminemish. I know it's unfair, but that style screams eminem whenever anyone does. The random demented humor thing It was good, maybe if you record it I could refrain from hearing Eminems voice when I hear it. You're good though, I give this like a 7/10 Keep droppin and I'll stalk you.

to tell tha true you may be one of tha most.... consistant on tha site... nice drop.... I like tha multi's homie... keep doing tha shit

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I'm Sicker Than Tha Plauges That God Sent Moses-Chosen

nice little multie action man....
wish you showed up for the league man cus your booted
but this here is a nice drop real creative man.

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Fear

well if you want back int the league let me know right now with your word that you'll show up!

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