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10-20-07, 12:52 AM | #1 | ||||||
New to RV
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Check it out... not finished... but need feedback
IP: 757B 905C
I tear shit down
And I rip shit up If you dont like ma style Nigga i dont give a fuck Ima stick on mine You could say that Im stuck And I gets lots of chicks So I know you hear the cluck And im built ford tough Like a brand new truck With the steel on the sidelines Damn right I got mines Damn right I might shine Bright like head lights Stop you like red lights Or like a stopsign Cause with these tite rhymes You would wanna think twice Dont try to take my lines I dont believe in free bites Im 2 wheelin it, but I aint never said bikes I'll roll on you bitch, but I aint never said dice Hot like spice, turn ya white like rice And niggas'll do anything for the right price |
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10-20-07, 02:28 AM | #2 | |||
сварливый
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IP: 30B6 8894
Pay me and I'll leave feedback.
. . . Nah nah actually haha I'm just here to tell you to leave links. You got 'till midnight!
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11-01-07, 02:38 PM | #3 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 4B80 9523
Bars were too short, and the topic was very basic and weak. Write on a hotter topic, expand your bars, and you should be aight.
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