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04-17-03, 12:14 AM | #1 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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Good Vs> Eviil
IP: 44B7 B6C4
LAshin out the war of good versus evil/
ya know this as God vs. devil/ but the fact is many of us are turning to the dark side/ this ain't Star Wars, we could all very well die/ The wickedness going on in this world today/ everyday in the news you hear of another human slayed/ this ain't funny no more, we could rap of killin people/ but the fact of this is, the world is still filled with evil/ and what us emcees say may not always be true/ but some how some way it still gets to our youth/ and they lead life with all these fucked up lives/ chance of them changin is like a gun vs. knife/ But by now you may think that evil is winning/ but God is great and he forgives even as we keep on sinning/ So now the battle took place in one person's life/ he wuz convinced to kill a nigga, cuz he was on the grind/so in the middle of the he went cop his 9/ came back to shoot a nigga in a matter of time/ but then the world froze as someone pressed the pause/ a dark and scary voice talked to him, with big claws/ "kill him and you don't have to worry bout nothin no more/ the movers won't have to force you out through the door"It was the only way to escape, he figured/ so he went right and started to pull the trigger/ "STOP, if you kill you'll end your life too/ what do you think the chance is that the cops won't find you/ you have a wife and kids for you to pull this shit off like you do/ so let him live and things will come out better for you"/ he threw down his gun and stared in the sky/ he asked"God, if you love, why must I suffer i'd just rather die"?/ he heard a voice that said"You know i love you/ and be patient and things will come out better for you"/ his enemy picked the gun up to start the clappin/ he stopped and paused, So ya'll have to tell me what will now happen/
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04-17-03, 08:41 AM | #2 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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04-17-03, 09:07 AM | #3 | ||||||
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Aiyyo SkiddLezz, that was tight. Keep it up dog
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04-17-03, 09:58 AM | #4 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 44B7 B6C4
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04-17-03, 11:30 AM | #5 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 44B7 B6C4
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04-17-03, 02:27 PM | #6 | ||||||
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Good Vs Evil .... I dont think you did your best on this one ... I believe you could have added in more imagery. OoNnEe
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04-17-03, 02:33 PM | #7 | |||||||
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this was pretty good. but like she said^^^^you shoulda tryied to make it more like a fantasy type thing na mean? i dont know..
could you peep my shit?http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39624 |
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