i woke up this morning with screams in my ears/
armageddon had landed, my worst fears had come clear/
there was an item on the news that made my face turn grey/
my old hometown....the whole place blown away/
i spent 10 minutes throwing up guts, 10 in tears/
another 20 just mkaing up texts to spend to my peers/
after an hour of sweating, it was safe betting, no-ones replying/ and now i'm getting stressed out of my mind, they must be dying/
i ran from my house, planned to go south, look for survivors/
soldiers on the streets, smoldering tarmac like giant lighters/
dogs running wild, attacking small children, adults crying/
some twirling guns with style, some firing/
the sky is black, scorched from this primed attack/
and as i jump into the car i just might look back/
i havent driven for 2 minutes before my hope starts fading/
the roads been demolished and the traffic is half blazin'/
and i'm half aging, my wills fadin', i dont want to go on/
i cant see how my country could rise and grow strong/
even though we've seen the war coming for so long/
even though we've been banking all bets on those bombs/
i take a walk to the crater, take a look in basin/
force my eyes to focus on this state that i'm facing/
nothing but rubble for a mile, i'm bent double for a while/
breaking down from my grief from the trouble, we're defiled/

this aint a fucking pillow.

uppin.

^lol... Word

This was a good piece
i enjoyed quite alot
good wordplay, flow was nice
and the content was good

-one love-

really this is ace, really felt it, if iwas sum1 who belieaved more multis lead 2doper pieces id say use more but i aint my fave lines

i spent 10 minutes throwing up guts, 10 in tears/
another 20 just mkaing up texts to spend to my peers/

^
just heartfelt

brillaint flow dawg keep writing!

yea that was hot.....propz

dat was ight

cheers to the first 2 guys and fuck you to the other 2 for not bothering to give a reason for their opinion.

uppin this again. and there are plenty of multis in this MR8.

and again^^

ill drop...nice emotions in it.not too strong bu not too weak.. the last four lines were really amazin...props

check ma OM out..Imaginary friendand please just dont read it..i need honest feedback lol like yours mine aint a polliow people! lol (good way to describe sleeps dawg)

dont get me wrong but mutis are rhymes in the same lines which there are none last time ig vie u feedback jonny i gave u sum positive ish fuck u