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08-13-03, 08:34 PM
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peep the "elite", this is why i aint a newb
IP:
Fuck it, here's a story fopr y'all
This kid carlos lonely in the streets, boney and all weak.. family’s missin’ He’s savegery’s victim, gets adopted.. by a daddy with millions; A low sperm-count and burnt-out but atleast he’s glad to be with him Spent 50 grand-on-a-trip-then.. hopped in the car when it was over But only half of him was sober.. pops-crashed n dropped-fast leavin carlos in a coma Life’s harder when ya loner.. speakin-of-that, a weekend-had-past, carlos still sleepin Just a lil weaklin’.. he awakes a month later scopin for pops to spill feelins.. He fa real-needs-him, wait.. he could not-hear-a-sound, a hospital with no doctors around he pulled the tubes from off-of-his-mouth.. thinking, “how can u be lost when ya found” He needs questions-asked, try’s to step but his legs-collapsed, but finds him a wheelchair Askin “am I blind or is nil here”.. don’t wanna roll so climbs on a steel pair(crutches) Switch up.. to when he leaves the hospital Nobodys there, he’s all alone-and-he’s-scared.. the clouds gather in heaps Rain drops crash at his feet, he’s coughing in spasms to breath And those actions repeat.. til his robe is drenched, lightening strobes in reps The wind howling blow-wing death.. the whole globes been messed He has NO defence.. standing on his last two……………..bro-ken legs his soul collapses with his body as his arms get weak, and the drama heats as the winds screams turn to cries from the martyr’d peeps who want his heart for meat, but carlos’s is so hard to beat the devil rose, showin carlos his family with severed throats he would have never known, that he was a sheep under the shepards nose he climbed the buildings and jumped.. trying to be dead but rose attempts slicing his hands from his wrists.. “damn it just clicked… this here is hell, and I’m trapped in this shit, I saw many signs” how the fuck could carlos kill himself when he already died? this is like the deepest shit I wrote, beyond punchlines and that bull shit. seriously read IN to this piece, if it don’t make sense then read it over n over, if it still don’t make sense then ask me.. aiight? |
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