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Topic: Flash Flood

Loser Leaves League... Winner Stays...

Checkin in........Flash food.hmmmmmm O.k
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hey yo, my internet is down, so i'm finally gettin a chance to check in, my verse will be dropped thursday night, good luck................................lol at flash flood, peace, 1

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Topic: Flash Flood

Lennox
Lisa
Devon
God

Intro.- It’s a Saturday morning (around 11am)…twenty year old, Lennox Harper, is slowly waking up after a long night out with the fellaz. Lennox still lives at home with his mom (Lisa) and his little brother (Devon)……

Damn, its already eleven, I gotta get my Ass Up/
Lisa screams “Finally” and Lennox Asks “What”/
Nevamind, hey…yestaday you left without gettin’ your Tasks Done/
It’s probably cause you were in a hurry to see Monica, That Slut/
I luv ya, but sumtimes you need to mind your own Business/
I mean…I get harassed every mornin’, what Is This?/
I’m your mom and until you get a job, I can also be your Critic/
Sorry, I aint go ta Harvard or get my masters in Physics/
Lisa rolls her eyes and walks upstairs
Lennox Thinking: Shit……my lyfe is worthless, its a Tragedy/
Even my moms has tha audAcity to crack jokes and Laugh At Me/
Losin’ grip, lyfe is slippin’ away…Gradually/
Wrong turns have left it spiraling downward…Rapidly/
I now undastand that I can only rely on myself, Instead of God/
F*** it, I’m gonna make my moms happy and Get a Job/
Jesus is a fake, it’s a wonder that Kids Survive/
Fed up with Strife, I think I’m betta off Dead than Alive/
Immediately, precipitation evelopes the ground and the sky, which earlier resembled peace and happiness, was covered in turmoil
Lisa yells downstairs “There is a Flash Flood Warning”/
Once again, Lennox Asks “What” Yawning/
I’m serious; the news man says we should Leave Soon/
We live in Atlanta, there is no reason to Believe Dude/
Devon runs downstairs and yells “I’m hungry, I Need Food”/
Mom lets take a minute ta think…and Breath Too/
Lennox glances out of the window and sees families frantically packing their cars
I don’t know, he might actually be Tellin’ tha Truth/
Stay calm, we need to move everythin from tha Cellar ta Roof/
Devon, get ready…don’t cry, I’m not Yellin at You/
Only grab your Relics and Jewels, crunk that…I’ll Settle with Shoes/
Lennox pears outside and notices that over 2 feet of rain has fallen
Ohh my God, we need to hurry…Move Quick/
Calm down Lennox, lets pray…we will all make it Through This/
How can you turn on me, God, and do sumthin so Ruthless?/
Stop stallin’ Lennox, screamin at tha Lord…is stupid and Useless/
A soft voice from above begins speaking
Hey Lennox, just rememba…I neva turned on you, you Turned On Me/
Repent now, that’s tha key…or think on u’r decision in hell for Eternity/
Not only your fam, actually, most worship me and Learn with Ease/
Don’t be concerned with me, its my choice…let me take this Furnace Leap/
The voice disappears
Radio: Its reported…Lennox Harper aka “tha boy who wouldn’t Grow Up”/…
has been found dead, causes were loss of oxygen…he drowned in his Throw Up/
Good friends of Lennox’s reported that they had never seen him So Drunk/
Apparently, tha flash flood was all a dream, and Lennox neva Woke Up/
Lord, please take care of my baby Lennox, his lyfe was full of Bad Luck/
I pray that you walk with Devon and stray him away from Flash Floods/

R.I.P. Lennox Harper

good luck, 1

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Flash Flood...

The day was at most peaceful, we was kissing outside
Not noticing the rainclouds,piling up in the sky
In our one moment of loving,we left our worries behind
And in that moment, wish I could just press rewind
But then everything moved so fast, it started out to pour
Less then an hour of rain, pushin through our door
Property damage was thorough no way we could stop it
We tried to plug in the radio,but the water flooded our outlets
Suddenly I couldn't describe this feeling of desperation
How we,America,our so powerful,yet taken out by Natural Devestation
Water didn't seem so harmless,perhaps a blessing dropping to earth
It may even be used to save our lives,as it quenches our thirst
A gift from God, I may say, but this day has changed my mind
When now, when we think water is common,as gifts get old with time
The Flash Flood, was unstoppable,nature at its danger peak
Because water, yet now dangerous,lookin peaceful at sea
Not even dangerous, though it corners you least expected
Your lungs,bringing air into the system,is now so hectic
It seems that we've been caught,by a danger that was never there
I don't need to tell a story,because you wouldn't care
Unless it happened to you, we are brought down at any time
Mother Nature,and danger have finally intertwined
Paths were crossed,when they met they finally combined
Maybe, if life was like a VCR,maybe if i could just rewind
Then I would've been prepared,before foolishly making love
With a ho I met on the street,losing my life to myself,not a Flash Flood.

BLAH,

good verse maddawg, I'm sayin goodbye to S.S cuz i'm probably out this shit.lol. Up for VOtes.

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lyft it for votes, good luck skiddlez, .................................................. .....peace, 1

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Uppin for votes, good verse,man and good luck.UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

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votes votes votes............................................. ...............................................upp in, peace

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i think this was obvious... maddawg killed skiddlez. Better concept more complex. I wasnt feelin the whole color thing man, dont do that. skiddlez honestly what the hell? America? flash flood natural disaster? wtf that was pretty stupid lol. u must have keystyled that in 1min.


vote=maddawg

Voting For MadDawg Here,

He Had better Imagry, Better overall content, however i wasn't feelin' the color format!

Lines Like:
Hey Lennox, just rememba…I neva turned on you, you Turned On Me/
Repent now, that’s tha key…or think on u’r decision in hell for Eternity/ - Were dope as fuck...

Skid, you had a good verse, but some rhymes were a little basic, but it was good none-the-less..

Vote: Maddawg_MKN

2-0, lift it for votes............................................. .................................................. .............................peace, 1

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good one skiddlez but maddawg i liked how u put all that together and the end threw me for a loop which was very damn creative much props very nice verse man....


voteMaddaWg

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thanx for tha feedback bribe one, just tryin ta keep ish interestin, its 3-0, lyft it for votes, peace, ........1

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good battle man, talk lata, peace, 1................................................. ................................................

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss