Sorry this is another 'repeating' poem, it's juss the style I like ...



For every blossoming rose, there is a rose that dies
For every child that smiles, there is a miserable child that cries
For every bright, sunny day, there are tornadoes and rain that fall
For every broken leg, a new baby learns to crawl

For every tear that drops, there is a blissful smile
For every suicide, someone else finds that life is worth while
For every mourning death, a new child is born
For every page of the Bible, there is a website full of porn

For every broken heart, there is a heart that finds true love
For every hunted animal, there is a beautiful flying dove
For every hateful fight, there is a couple getting married
For every new born child, there is a person getting burried

For every drive-by shooting, there is a group of friends
For every new beginning is just the beginning of the end...

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Dealing with backstabbers, there was one thing I learned
They're only powerful when you got your back turned
I yearn for the day I finally meet them again
So I can give them all a taste of their own medicine
¤ 3ast Sid3 ¤

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Nice poem, had a good flow to it and it was well organized.

a few grammatical errors and I see alot of repeating nouns .... mix in some synonyms and you can take it up a knotch. peace

I liked it. The repeating motiff never really get old to me if it's done well, and this one does. I like the line

For every new beginning is just the beginning of the end...

It just sounds really cool.

peace

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We are the music makers,
and we are the dreamers of dreams.

Yeah. This was unrelenting and rigid in it's style and meaning. The quite elementary yet well put together imagery was nice to read.

But the way you ended it made it a bit more than that. It rounded it off in a slightly echoing way...though not executed as good as it could've been. The overall effect was still there...

...resp...

I thought taht poem was realy weel written and it is so true. i like the repetetive-ness. i thoguht it was well thought out.very good. i look forward to seeing more of this