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Old 11-07-03, 06:30 PM   #1
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Please believe Im da hottest on the block/
niggas never tellin me to stop/
my standards never drop/
and i dont get down wit suckin on da cock/
makin niggas sick, temperature over a 100 degrees/
mami so hot niggas be beggin on the knees/
wrap it tight, want pleasure not a disease/
for dogs who like it raw, back up nigga please/
dem bitches try to test me/
but im harder than the SAT/
im a real ass chick/
niggas pay me just for touchin on da dick/
got dollas dat buy Gucci kicks/
wear skirts dat fit da hips/
i make sure i drive the hottest whip/
you might can rock a boat/
but can u rock a ship?
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Old 11-07-03, 06:34 PM   #2
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Precious Vixen, You as boring as richard nixon, You should listen do this shit dat im spittin, little bitch now listen,
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Old 11-07-03, 07:25 PM   #3
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um, elevate should be ur primary objective, use wordplay, complexity, vocabulary, metaphors, multi's...
but it did flow, props on that...
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Old 11-08-03, 11:34 PM   #4
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1 Word..Elevate..you need to use more word choice and wordplay..all of this will come with time..just work on it a little..peace
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