this can also be found on eminem.net under sn Krine_Sixty-Nine
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Your lyrics lack the eloquence of musical ability
this is a fucking rap battle and theres no hostility
If i wasnt up in your mom i might have some sympathy
but since i am i know you are a low down drug addict
you and your sucky lyrical comprehension makes me sick
If god gave me a towel id strangle you with it
when the cops roll up, guns outs, ill say its my business
your like a die-hard wigger slave, always owned
your so stupid its as if your 24-7 stoned
your a wannabe perfectionist up in mandy moores fan club
i swear the last time you got next to her you tried to get a hug
but not even she could stand you she shoved you down
nobody can stand you, here's my knife, get outta town

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tell me what you think ...it couldve been a sorta battle but i rote it ... only took like 5 minites and at the end when i say get outta town i mean for him to slit his wrist what can i do to make things like this betta?