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Old 05-21-06, 02:36 PM   #1
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3. Chris Stylez (4-4) vs 4. Nick Fletcher (4-2)

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Old 05-21-06, 06:45 PM   #3
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Chris Stylez aka Young Dollar aka D-Rock.

Fuck me, I read your verse last week. How do you expect to win with fucking 4-line bars and a shit style, not to mention that you need to learn to rhyme properly first.

Anyway.. check it,

Ya don’t stand half a chance. .
. .and ya record shows ya lose half the time,
Because ya style is considered half-ass. .
. .and that’s just the half that rhymes.

^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. .
Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar.
Kid, I’ll rattle ya brains. . and leave ya with internal bleedin’
And have you so fucking lost – you’ll be the main star in the next season.
I’m bringing a new theme to this beatin’. . going beyond old school, cock
You can just call me caveman, the way my club’ll be bashing D-Rock.
I’ll school you ho, my lines pack double meaning. . so sit and take notes, G
Cuz after this battle, in reference to you. . there’ll be no votes to C

Fuck it yo,
I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame,
And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again
You can’t match up to me. . I’ll bitch slap you left and right
Causing this battle to be a shut-out. .
. . like ya moms does to you every night!
I got no props for you bro. . Chris can’t handle the verse that I show
Hell, he can’t stomach his verses and it’s that bad. .
. . he’s dropped shit 8 weeks in a row!


Yeah, you're fucking wack bitch.
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Old 05-23-06, 09:22 PM   #4
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checkin...i'll have ma verse in ontime
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Old 05-24-06, 11:07 AM   #5
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher
People Who Can't Vote.

GAY BITCHES.
So everyone apart from Appocolyptik is free to vote away.




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Whatever, I'm voting whether you like it or not you immature little fag. As everyone knows my votes are fair and knowledgable, if you won I'll vote for you despite this petty little bullshit you're giving me. Besides you dropped a nice verse, he'll have to come hard to beat it, which I doubt he will. The quote half your verse punch was nice and so was moving house.
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Old 05-25-06, 06:31 PM   #6
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Whatever fuck-face... it won't count though.
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Old 05-25-06, 10:20 PM   #7
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Somebody need to get Nick Fletcher up off my ass
.....................Cuz his verse aint a verse
It more in the style of a history class
Damn...you sad nick but the emotions dont move me
I would hope someone remembered my old alias
But postin em in da same post is makin ya look like a groupie
And why you keep poppin about how nigga is wack
Like you really doing alot more than the rest
Dont make bring the real reality back
By reminding you that you'll only be a text head at best
Im Authentic while you artificial going along with the initial
Scared to try something new knowin ya creativity is very little
Tell you the truth, all ya flows is straight bagage
You I damage, with flows of a savage
my rhymes take away from ya means
Making your bitch ass less than average
Underestimate lines and eatin niggas rhymes
Exspect to be digesting a knuckle sandwhich
With punches so hard, I'll even bring myself to my knees
Command you bitch to to lay down
And Recieve the feast of my dog meat
All my dogs hold the long heat
So consider them a squad of range rovers
Jab Jab uppercut to ya chin
To increase the thoughts that you aint sober
Go head and takes the chin checks and get slept
Puttin you sleep faster than sweet 16 sleepovers


yeah w/e.
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Old 05-25-06, 10:48 PM   #8
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Ya don’t stand half a chance. .
. .and ya record shows ya lose half the time,
Because ya style is considered half-ass. .
. .and that’s just the half that rhymes.
^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. .
Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar.
^ROFL love how it goes off that first bar
I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame,
And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again
got no props for you bro. . Chris can’t handle the verse that I show
Hell, he can’t stomach his verses and it’s that bad. .
. . he’s dropped shit 8 weeks in a row!

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seriously wtf? it was horrible trying to read chris' verse. took me a good 10-15 mins to read over and over to see if any good lines in there, but I really didn't find anything. Nick on the other hand, almost all lines were dope, and ones that weren't were atleast decent. lmao I love the first 4 bars. the mockin' his style line KILLED IT. rofl still laughing from it. one-sided here

v/Nick easily
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Old 05-25-06, 10:48 PM   #9
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Ya don’t stand half a chance. .
. .and ya record shows ya lose half the time,
Because ya style is considered half-ass. .
. .and that’s just the half that rhymes.
lol

^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. .
Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar.
pretty coo
Kid, I’ll rattle ya brains. . and leave ya with internal bleedin’
And have you so fucking lost – you’ll be the main star in the next season.
kinda played
I’m bringing a new theme to this beatin’. . going beyond old school, cock
You can just call me caveman, the way my club’ll be bashing D-Rock.
ok
I’ll school you ho, my lines pack double meaning. . so sit and take notes, G
Cuz after this battle, in reference to you. . there’ll be no votes to C
ok

Fuck it yo,
I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame,
And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again
feelin it
You can’t match up to me. . I’ll bitch slap you left and right
Causing this battle to be a shut-out. .
. . like ya moms does to you every night!
ehh
I got no props for you bro. . Chris can’t handle the verse that I show
Hell, he can’t stomach his verses and it’s that bad. .
. . he’s dropped shit 8 weeks in a row!
lol, made me laugh

ya, this verse was aight. your wording is pretty off and on, but when it's on you can really tell a difference in the punches. i liked a few lines, the rest weren't really great, but i liked the mocking of his style shit, that was pretty funny. aight verse, definitely not bad, but not quite great.

vs.

Somebody need to get Nick Fletcher up off my ass
.....................Cuz his verse aint a verse
It more in the style of a history class
nah
Damn...you sad nick but the emotions dont move me
I would hope someone remembered my old alias
But postin em in da same post is makin ya look like a groupie
stretched lines here playa, ok punch
And why you keep poppin about how nigga is wack
Like you really doing alot more than the rest
Dont make bring the real reality back
By reminding you that you'll only be a text head at best
nah
Im Authentic while you artificial going along with the initial
Scared to try something new knowin ya creativity is very little
nah
Tell you the truth, all ya flows is straight bagage
You I damage, with flows of a savage
my rhymes take away from ya means
Making your bitch ass less than average
Underestimate lines and eatin niggas rhymes
Exspect to be digesting a knuckle sandwhich
averagne/mean shit isnt a new concept, plus 4 lines wasnt makin this smooth
With punches so hard, I'll even bring myself to my knees
Command you bitch to to lay down
And Recieve the feast of my dog meat
All my dogs hold the long heat
lol nah
So consider them a squad of range rovers
Jab Jab uppercut to ya chin
To increase the thoughts that you aint sober
Go head and takes the chin checks and get slept
Puttin you sleep faster than sweet 16 sleepovers
nah man

man, i dunno. your wording needs alot of work, wayyyy tooo wordy of lines.


vote- nick, better punches, better disses, most importantly a readable structure.
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Old 05-25-06, 11:19 PM   #10
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Im gettin a little to busy for this Leaque...Im really only doing it to elevate my text when i do things quick and all... But yeah i know he was gonna take this.....
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Old 05-26-06, 10:17 AM   #11
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Ya don’t stand half a chance. .
. .and ya record shows ya lose half the time,
Because ya style is considered half-ass. .
. .and that’s just the half that rhymes.
^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. .
Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar.
^ROFL love how it goes off that first bar
I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame,
And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again
got no props for you bro. . Chris can’t handle the verse that I show
Hell, he can’t stomach his verses and it’s that bad. .
. . he’s dropped shit 8 weeks in a row!


vs


Like you really doing alot more than the rest
Dont make bring the real reality back
By reminding you that you'll only be a text head at best

chris you have to work on getting some personals in your verse that hit
meaning that your opponant would read and go "ouch"
your verse is ok but their more of statements than real punchlines
it just needs some firepower

nick i read ya shit forever, u dont need feedback


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Old 05-26-06, 12:02 PM   #12
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Despite what Nick Fletcher says I'm still voting, I have no quarell with him and don't see why he has to try and ban me from voting.

^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. .
Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar.
Kid, I’ll rattle ya brains. . and leave ya with internal bleedin’
And have you so fucking lost – you’ll be the main star in the next season.
I’m bringing a new theme to this beatin’. . going beyond old school, cock
You can just call me caveman, the way my club’ll be bashing D-Rock.
I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame,
And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again

vs

Nothing

As I said in my first post, Nick came nice in this battle. I've always said he was good that's why I called him out for a battle 3 weeks ago in the special event. The 4 lines I quoted were nice and he flipped the trailer home punch really well. Again D Rock wordplay was well done, the lost punch was cool and the one about his gay layout was a harsh personal. Chris Stylez on the other hand dropped very weak due to his confused and difficult to read layout. It's like your copying Fractures one by dropping a really short setup and long punch, but you stretch it TOO far. Your punches were pretty played as well. Once you work on your layout then work on getting better concepts and wording them harshly.

V/ Nick Fletcher
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Old 05-26-06, 12:07 PM   #13
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Word, I am dope... ^ but that vote doesn't count because I said this fag couldn't vote in my battles. Way to waste your time queer.
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Old 05-26-06, 12:10 PM   #14
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Old 05-26-06, 12:22 PM   #15
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Quote:
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Word, I am dope... ^ but that vote doesn't count because I said this fag couldn't vote in my battles. Way to waste your time queer.


You're one wierd motherfucker, I voted for you and left you decent feedback and you still don't want it to count? Too bad, cause it ain't like Kempo's gonna delete it.
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