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05-21-06, 02:36 PM | #1 | ||||
The Saviour
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3. Chris Stylez (4-4) vs 4. Nick Fletcher (4-2)
IP: 04AF 913D
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05-21-06, 04:46 PM | #2 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: A6B3 421B
People Who Can't Vote.
GAY BITCHES. So everyone apart from Appocolyptik is free to vote away. Links. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228546 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228554 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228548 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228544 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228557 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228553 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228547 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228545 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228550 Last edited by Nick Fletcher : 05-25-06 at 10:36 PM. |
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05-21-06, 06:45 PM | #3 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: A6B3 421B
Chris Stylez aka Young Dollar aka D-Rock.
Fuck me, I read your verse last week. How do you expect to win with fucking 4-line bars and a shit style, not to mention that you need to learn to rhyme properly first. Anyway.. check it, Ya don’t stand half a chance. . . .and ya record shows ya lose half the time, Because ya style is considered half-ass. . . .and that’s just the half that rhymes. ^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. . Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar. Kid, I’ll rattle ya brains. . and leave ya with internal bleedin’ And have you so fucking lost – you’ll be the main star in the next season. I’m bringing a new theme to this beatin’. . going beyond old school, cock You can just call me caveman, the way my club’ll be bashing D-Rock. I’ll school you ho, my lines pack double meaning. . so sit and take notes, G Cuz after this battle, in reference to you. . there’ll be no votes to C Fuck it yo, I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame, And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again You can’t match up to me. . I’ll bitch slap you left and right Causing this battle to be a shut-out. . . . like ya moms does to you every night! I got no props for you bro. . Chris can’t handle the verse that I show Hell, he can’t stomach his verses and it’s that bad. . . . he’s dropped shit 8 weeks in a row! Yeah, you're fucking wack bitch. |
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05-23-06, 09:22 PM | #4 | ||||
Semper Fi
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IP: 0825 899A
checkin...i'll have ma verse in ontime
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05-24-06, 11:07 AM | #5 | ||||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: E7F7 D0A6
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Whatever, I'm voting whether you like it or not you immature little fag. As everyone knows my votes are fair and knowledgable, if you won I'll vote for you despite this petty little bullshit you're giving me. Besides you dropped a nice verse, he'll have to come hard to beat it, which I doubt he will. The quote half your verse punch was nice and so was moving house. |
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05-25-06, 06:31 PM | #6 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 60E5 1FAF
Whatever fuck-face... it won't count though.
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05-25-06, 10:20 PM | #7 | ||||
Semper Fi
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Somebody need to get Nick Fletcher up off my ass
.....................Cuz his verse aint a verse It more in the style of a history class Damn...you sad nick but the emotions dont move me I would hope someone remembered my old alias But postin em in da same post is makin ya look like a groupie And why you keep poppin about how nigga is wack Like you really doing alot more than the rest Dont make bring the real reality back By reminding you that you'll only be a text head at best Im Authentic while you artificial going along with the initial Scared to try something new knowin ya creativity is very little Tell you the truth, all ya flows is straight bagage You I damage, with flows of a savage my rhymes take away from ya means Making your bitch ass less than average Underestimate lines and eatin niggas rhymes Exspect to be digesting a knuckle sandwhich With punches so hard, I'll even bring myself to my knees Command you bitch to to lay down And Recieve the feast of my dog meat All my dogs hold the long heat So consider them a squad of range rovers Jab Jab uppercut to ya chin To increase the thoughts that you aint sober Go head and takes the chin checks and get slept Puttin you sleep faster than sweet 16 sleepovers yeah w/e.
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05-25-06, 10:48 PM | #8 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: C958 BFF7
Ya don’t stand half a chance. .
. .and ya record shows ya lose half the time, Because ya style is considered half-ass. . . .and that’s just the half that rhymes. ^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. . Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar. ^ROFL love how it goes off that first bar I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame, And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again got no props for you bro. . Chris can’t handle the verse that I show Hell, he can’t stomach his verses and it’s that bad. . . . he’s dropped shit 8 weeks in a row! v.s nothing seriously wtf? it was horrible trying to read chris' verse. took me a good 10-15 mins to read over and over to see if any good lines in there, but I really didn't find anything. Nick on the other hand, almost all lines were dope, and ones that weren't were atleast decent. lmao I love the first 4 bars. the mockin' his style line KILLED IT. rofl still laughing from it. one-sided here v/Nick easily
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05-25-06, 10:48 PM | #9 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 2029 97B3
Ya don’t stand half a chance. .
. .and ya record shows ya lose half the time, Because ya style is considered half-ass. . . .and that’s just the half that rhymes. lol ^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. . Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar. pretty coo Kid, I’ll rattle ya brains. . and leave ya with internal bleedin’ And have you so fucking lost – you’ll be the main star in the next season. kinda played I’m bringing a new theme to this beatin’. . going beyond old school, cock You can just call me caveman, the way my club’ll be bashing D-Rock. ok I’ll school you ho, my lines pack double meaning. . so sit and take notes, G Cuz after this battle, in reference to you. . there’ll be no votes to C ok Fuck it yo, I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame, And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again feelin it You can’t match up to me. . I’ll bitch slap you left and right Causing this battle to be a shut-out. . . . like ya moms does to you every night! ehh I got no props for you bro. . Chris can’t handle the verse that I show Hell, he can’t stomach his verses and it’s that bad. . . . he’s dropped shit 8 weeks in a row! lol, made me laugh ya, this verse was aight. your wording is pretty off and on, but when it's on you can really tell a difference in the punches. i liked a few lines, the rest weren't really great, but i liked the mocking of his style shit, that was pretty funny. aight verse, definitely not bad, but not quite great. vs. Somebody need to get Nick Fletcher up off my ass .....................Cuz his verse aint a verse It more in the style of a history class nah Damn...you sad nick but the emotions dont move me I would hope someone remembered my old alias But postin em in da same post is makin ya look like a groupie stretched lines here playa, ok punch And why you keep poppin about how nigga is wack Like you really doing alot more than the rest Dont make bring the real reality back By reminding you that you'll only be a text head at best nah Im Authentic while you artificial going along with the initial Scared to try something new knowin ya creativity is very little nah Tell you the truth, all ya flows is straight bagage You I damage, with flows of a savage my rhymes take away from ya means Making your bitch ass less than average Underestimate lines and eatin niggas rhymes Exspect to be digesting a knuckle sandwhich averagne/mean shit isnt a new concept, plus 4 lines wasnt makin this smooth With punches so hard, I'll even bring myself to my knees Command you bitch to to lay down And Recieve the feast of my dog meat All my dogs hold the long heat lol nah So consider them a squad of range rovers Jab Jab uppercut to ya chin To increase the thoughts that you aint sober Go head and takes the chin checks and get slept Puttin you sleep faster than sweet 16 sleepovers nah man man, i dunno. your wording needs alot of work, wayyyy tooo wordy of lines. vote- nick, better punches, better disses, most importantly a readable structure.
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05-25-06, 11:19 PM | #10 | ||||
Semper Fi
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Im gettin a little to busy for this Leaque...Im really only doing it to elevate my text when i do things quick and all... But yeah i know he was gonna take this.....
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05-26-06, 10:17 AM | #11 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: B26C 448D
Ya don’t stand half a chance. .
. .and ya record shows ya lose half the time, Because ya style is considered half-ass. . . .and that’s just the half that rhymes. ^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. . Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar. ^ROFL love how it goes off that first bar I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame, And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again got no props for you bro. . Chris can’t handle the verse that I show Hell, he can’t stomach his verses and it’s that bad. . . . he’s dropped shit 8 weeks in a row! vs Like you really doing alot more than the rest Dont make bring the real reality back By reminding you that you'll only be a text head at best chris you have to work on getting some personals in your verse that hit meaning that your opponant would read and go "ouch" your verse is ok but their more of statements than real punchlines it just needs some firepower nick i read ya shit forever, u dont need feedback v/ nick |
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05-26-06, 12:02 PM | #12 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: 25AD FD05
Despite what Nick Fletcher says I'm still voting, I have no quarell with him and don't see why he has to try and ban me from voting.
^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. . Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar. Kid, I’ll rattle ya brains. . and leave ya with internal bleedin’ And have you so fucking lost – you’ll be the main star in the next season. I’m bringing a new theme to this beatin’. . going beyond old school, cock You can just call me caveman, the way my club’ll be bashing D-Rock. I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame, And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again vs Nothing As I said in my first post, Nick came nice in this battle. I've always said he was good that's why I called him out for a battle 3 weeks ago in the special event. The 4 lines I quoted were nice and he flipped the trailer home punch really well. Again D Rock wordplay was well done, the lost punch was cool and the one about his gay layout was a harsh personal. Chris Stylez on the other hand dropped very weak due to his confused and difficult to read layout. It's like your copying Fractures one by dropping a really short setup and long punch, but you stretch it TOO far. Your punches were pretty played as well. Once you work on your layout then work on getting better concepts and wording them harshly. V/ Nick Fletcher |
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05-26-06, 12:07 PM | #13 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 60E5 1FAF
Word, I am dope... ^ but that vote doesn't count because I said this fag couldn't vote in my battles. Way to waste your time queer.
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05-26-06, 12:10 PM | #14 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: B26C 448D
lmao you guys are hilarous
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05-26-06, 12:22 PM | #15 | ||||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: 25AD FD05
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You're one wierd motherfucker, I voted for you and left you decent feedback and you still don't want it to count? Too bad, cause it ain't like Kempo's gonna delete it. |
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