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Lunatic Lines vs One-Man-Band
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8 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-02-04 at 02:28 AM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
Lunatic Lines has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 06:29 AM.
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One-Man-Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 06:30 AM.
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One man band is obviously the wackest of the wack/
hes a loner, cos all of his friends left him alone to rap/ thats why hes so crap, cos theres no one for him to bite from/ ya couldnt succeed in this "impossible mission" if you were "tom"/ I drop shit like fuckin bombs, to me every one of youre hits is weak/ I cant believe you thought you could "step to me" so take a seat/ Im makin the decision to blind all of your visions/ you cant ever beat me, so heres my proposition/ pack up your stuff and leave all the rhyming/ Cos you couldnt get "dope" if you went to a chronic seller to drive in/ I have such sick timing, all of my hits are on the money/ but yours are spread out and shit, ya punches arent funny/ Kill with lead, loading my nine to aim for your head/ ya couldnt "hit hard" even if you were "bumping the thread"/ Im so perfect that you cant handle me, youre getting tossed/ you think youre so good............ but what about those battles you lost?/ |
Yo, Strain necks like train wrecks, kid you a lunatic.. im leavin' ya brain hexed ya ARE CRAZY battlin me. even ya shrink would treat ya.. he like "fuck this kids insane... next" left with a maimed head...get prayin kid, i hope youve said a blessin' "Names cov'd in L's" only W's this fools ever seen are followed by web addresses Strap fags with a curse, Im killin' this kid, but still Im just half assin this verse Not cos of D/R.. but just cos after ya dropped ya stuff laughs passed n' conversed An endless bashin' in relentless fashion, bitches drop dead when I'm hittin' em' Coulda stopped wit my first bar, so fuck it kid, you'll only get the 8 line minimum!!! |
aight... sorry bout that... just checkin if my structure gets messed.. n it did
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Yo, Strain necks like train wrecks, kid you a lunatic.. im leavin' ya brain hexed battlin me?? even ya shrink wouldnt treat ya... he like "fuck this kids insane... next" left with a maimed head...get prayin kid, i hope youve said a blessin' "Names cov'd in L's" only W's this fools ever seen are followed by web addresses Strap fags with a curse, Im killin' this kid, but still Im just half assin this verse Not cos of D/R.. but just cos after ya dropped ya stuff laughs passed n' conversed An endless bashin' in relentless fashion, bitches drop dead when I'm hittin' em' Coulda stopped wit my first bar, so fuck it kid, you'll only get the 8 line minimum!!! |
uppin.............................................
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Voted For: One-Man-Band
nice battle fella's..but i gotta go with one man he had a betta ryhme scheme and some ill punchlines...luna u had some good ass concepts but its like ya words is barley ryhmein nahmean fix ya ryhme scheme then u'll be good opener-one structure- a tie punchlines-one creativity-luna multis-one personals-luna finisher-one enjoyed-one...my explanation is ond a top nuff said he got dis RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG |
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Voted For: One-Man-Band
im gonna give this ta omb cause he had a couple of punches that connected"web addresses line" you both had a couple simular lines..omb jus came harder n had really nice flow..ll your punches all missed ta me dawg..srry but i found you came a bit weak in this battle...your closer was alright but jus was'nt enough ta take the win...no hate ..jus my opinion. hit these up.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167 topical:200 posts http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137724 me vs 650 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138106 me vs sten.cell http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138359 me vs gran..chi |
Voted For: Lunatic Lines
yeah I like ya shit cuz...punches hit harder...all on was focused on was multis...holla baq at my battle.http://community.rapverse.com/showb...790#post1463790 |
Voted For: One-Man-Band
Structure: one man band flow: one man band multies: one man band: punches: both personal: neither i vote for you because your stucture was more compact.. your punchlines were okay, but could of been better, your multies were alright, enough to beat out his.. your flow was cool too, so I vote for you for an overall stronger verse.. please return favor with an honest drop in mines, thanx http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139869 |
sorry man... got any other battles that need votes?? cos marvs in my crew....
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oh, never mind then you don't have to vote.. |
Voted For: One-Man-Band
One: had a nice flow, structure... some crzy multiez and thats where i get enjoyment form so i guess u won that car also... nice creativity... and string punches..7.5/10 LL: most of ur punches were played, had an aight flow, no multiez thought i saw a few metas... but aight verse.. 5/10 VOTE: one man band.. |
Voted For: Lunatic Lines
i voted for lunatic cause i like his flow and some multi's and some goo punchlines. The closer was good and i like the play off his name in the opener. One man band, i like your punchlines kindahard to read, your structure was mest up but i liked your multis. All in all Lunatic won this by a few points. good battle though no hate. SHow some love to my battles since i did to yours Me vs Robkilla http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ghlight=degreez Me vs. **flex** http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ghlight=degreez Thanks |
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