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white_boi
I set up tha battle you lil bitch go ahead an spit...its in front lines.
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no fuck that...
me and you.... lets go i need a battle anyone so u will do..... |
Aiight ill set it up you spit first 6 linez.
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Accept?
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Ay white boi you lookin to battle....i mean you lookin to lose still.
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well i dunno im still a noob i havent battled fo real yet
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Aiight then ill show mercy on your ass....this time.But when you get in some battles ill be comin 4 you.
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ill do it if you spit first
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U sure...1 losss doesnt look good on your record.
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thas coo i need a battle and heres the oppertunity.... ill take the chance im a noob wit white potential
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lol i feel ya...i respect dat too but you gotta lose ill set it up. Due in 45 min so spit 8 linez.
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so where do we battle? and how do i get there? and when do i spit?
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Yo click on this link an it will take you to tha battle. Accept it an spit 8 linez as soon as you can. Its always gonna be in front lines
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140395 |
okay do i spit there? or do i wait for you?
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ayyo i spit my verse already so...
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Aiight me to son now we jus wait for votes. AY son you aint that bad for 11 or 12 you pretty good.
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Yo man, let me take whitey next, I've been looking for another rookie to battle me for a while.
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thx man i was nervous at first, but man i jus wanna rhyme i dont care about winnig or losing right now... ill worry about that when the votes bein casted
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Aiight Kid-Dizzle vote on tha battle too son. DOnt unda estimate his ass though hes aiight for 11 years old.
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Whitey, I see you got some flow, you wanna go a round with me?
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man i might not be able to p-dizzle im goin to mu cuzins house for the day and they ban me from the house so... but ill do it tonight or tomorrow fo sho
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yo wolf start uppn votes cause we only got one
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Aight bro, just let me know when you wanna. But I voted on your guys' battle, so how bout y'all return the favor? Remember, vote honestly. Thankns, 'preciate it.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139283 vs. Leroy Lyric http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941 vs. Avanish http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138907 vs. Phatinum |
ayyo wolf or anybody? whats verse structure? cause someone said mine was horrible but i dunno what it is
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Your rhymes was in a paragraph nex tim make it like dis
for example aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa like mine was |
so im tryn ta make it messy sorta?
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