Welcome Back, Lady Fiya...
 

Left Feed on Hella Tracks, but here's a few...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208943
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207381
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205226

I'm in a whole new transition. I been elevating these past months with riding beats, fixing flow problems from the past, learning how to engineer/mix my own tracks, and what not... Hope y'all see the growth from my oldest shit to this one.

This Track is called Tip The Bottle Up for my mixtape, this is my verse... I'll post the full Wild Wunz track when Laidback record’s his over, and 151 records his verse and the chorus..

If you a hater, then go ahead and post. I appreciate the time y'all spending on me. :thumbup:





--I leave feed on the majority of tracks on this site, I'd hope I'd get some feed good/bad in return. Thanks much.

Whats good Ma, i see you spittin it raw like i said on aim this was fast....lol Twista style....Adlibs u lowered it nice..it sounds lil betta than u showed me on aim emotions are aite...mic presence indeed you improved on that ....

hahaha nice A.I

the beats pretty cool.. the quality is good.. not best.. but not worst.. the lyrics is tite.. but ur flow seems sorta forced.. ahh iono how to explain that lol.. but lyrics are good as hell.. flow is good.. jst a lil. yeah.. well iono.. but yeah.. the dubbing is off a little.. but its cool.. good job though ;) since this is the first track i've heard from u lol

feelin the beat....

im really likin how u came in.......delivery is good....your stacked vocals soundin good....flow is on point pretty well....damn this is a hot track for real.....you added to the beat tremendously in my opinion....good job

@ Dabatos, forced? eh i guess lol... i wrote this months ago can say it backwards and forwards.. i think i know what you mean. I record it all once through, no punch-ins... that's prolly why i sound like that, but thanx fa the feed. :thumbup:

OMG You sound like shawnna. :) Voicewise

Aight now the beat like I told you sound like some sega game. I like it tho.. The flow in this was strait, never went on and wasn't all abc. Lyrics made me a bit scared of you though. Delivery was good too, usually when I listen to shit from RV they always have a bad quality about them that stick out. Nothing was bad with this. Except you should make it longer. If they play this in the club niggas gon' be disapointed don't ya think. ;) Where did you get the beat? :(

Told you on aim already but I'll say it again...

I'm definitely feeling the beat and I feel ya dropped some hotness on it. Your flow was suited for this type of song, you be spitting fast yet it's not hard to understand you. Sometimes when people spit fast they rush their words and some things are hard to understand but you kept a nice balance. Your presence was good especially knowing this isn't your favorite type of track. Lyrics were nice, it's quite catchy actually, sticks to the head...

And you know what I told you...truth...nothing else...

Beats nice...flow is cool...lyrics deffo club type but they aight...delivery is aight...quality wise it's cool as well...you done ya thing girl nice track the fast flow bit was aight too...nice shit :thumbup:

yo girl wots up not spoke to you in ages, anyway

nice lady, very nice

love the beat, its quick and suits your style perfectly, lyrics are fire, I thought near the begin the flow went slightly but apart from that it on point, love the ending and the way you came in, very gud return track girl like it alot

pz

Good shit nigga freall...i mos def see da change since ive peeped everything u do..for some reason you fit all ur words into the beat and it fits perfect u gettin it girl u doin ya thing on this shit..i would like to get on some collab type shit tho wit you artik n LV..should be some dope shit.

you sound like a baby version of EVE wit throat cancer.......

beat was aight.... flow..... sloppy...........


delivery... forced


theres your break down hoe......



'respect'

damn u used to be cool

yea nice shit I was feelin ya verse
I like ya rap style. and how you flowed to that beat. Nice grimy lyrics ma good shit keep it up.

can you leave some feed on this
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205666

liked this it was nice u got some skillz ma!i liked the beat especially and the way u spit it all out!holla back but i really did like this!

damnnnn u've stepped up big time good work ma we should collab sometime and murder this sites audios lol now how that sound? huh 1ne..holla at me...

the beat is cool but it aint my favorite, quality is dope, lyrics were party type so i like them, flow was, flow was off and on u know, but still, keep em coming cuz your rv's best female...no joke,
dope song:thumbup:

Bitch......... dont make me choke you by your pubics!!!!!


dont be mad cuz im being real wit ya

and q....... this aint got nothing to do wit ya..

i aint even takin our lil fued seriously ....... so be easy...

case and point........ fiya= whitney post pipe..= not dope

lol @ Tito being the only one to make a retarded comment... Aren't you the one that sound like some Sesame Street characters? I'd rather be told I sound like a rapper than a drawn up character. Tito can you even ride a beat? Or try to... Q, that nigga never been coo, he just mad cuz he spits random verses and slaps a beat behind his voice as he talks. Not flow but he talks, Spoken Word disses, bitch ass nigga. Shut the hell up and worry about your Fall Audio Tourney Battle that you are losing against G: Duece...

LV, Tito's not a rapper. He talks over music kinda like the commentators for Wrestling when the Wrestler walks out making his entrance to the ring and they play his music. And there's always this one guy talkin, that would be what Tito does.

He slaps random beats behind his voice and sound boring as fuck...

Thats all code for.... Tito is my favorite rapper on RV ..... and i want the penis, yesterday if not sooner :thumbup:

Peelin back the hate i know what you sayin bitch

not really feelin the beat, sounds like some techno shit
n since you said it was a club track i was surprised at how short it was
flow was a lil choppy at first but besides that it was on point
quality and everything was good........as alwayz
delivery and presence was there, this drop sounded reeeeeaaaaal good
but i wish you woulda spit through the whole track like you did at the end....w/ the lil twista style, i dont know why but it sounds like you spit kinda like trina

but newayz nice drop, ya movin on up, keep doin ya thing
i'll get at you later about that collab as well

damn, im bored here's some more feed.......

lyrics and everything was good, adlibs were lowered nicely
ummm.....get rid of the hiss, im one to complain tho i never bother w/ shit like that
dubs are a lil off

yea, w/e.....but uhhh, collab-yea-dont forget

Like I said on aim:

Rapdemon: u got that "Im a gurl, and Im 1000000 times better than you, so dont even try" type style

Rapdemon: and u back it up

Word. You are really talented, presence was really good, lyrics were dope, and flow was near perfect. Good shit

listening


damn ma, you ripped it badly, your qaulty wasnt that great but good i guess, you most definitly need to collab with sensor on this word, probably the dopest female ive hear din a while, if you had a diff. style you would be hella better than jean grey, word, but yo you was gassing hella fast...dopeness


Rtf on my track
MY STATUS

thnkkas

thanx i def appreciate the feed peoples. Uppin'.. :thumbup:

*listening*

hell yeaah..this was tight...u flowed pretty well on it,i like the way u used the bacardi.hineken and stuff...tight...beat was decent..i was feelin it..no falts tofind...simply a tight joint...cool

hit my sig sis :thumbup:

beat's okay, nothing i would give my left nut for...

flo is cool...no memorable punches so far...but you put it down at the end. Quality's great, shit it's better than mine (which ain't sayin much), yea this was a good track, single wise i could see this bumpin on the radio with a catchy chorus and more verse-age and for the record...I could drink you under the table...
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THE ORIGINAL ALCOHOLOIC - BLACKMAGE

nice track though
fav line: We get it crunk we ain't gon whoop nobody ass but yalls

Welcoming yourself back? -_-...

nice dubs:)
lol your flow is sick as fuck!, i love your voice, i used to be like hmm she gonna be a good artists some day, but i think your startin to grasp that now. your lyrics are dope fa sho, nice connects between lines and a nice emotion. i like the beat lil loop kinda beat could really throw some brain damaging lyrics on, and well you did that.

props o and thanks again wit the help...1

Yo girl i can tell you definitely elevated. Keep it up. I was waiting for more on this track you cut me short, I need another minute of fiya........lol. good shit keep it up. layered vocals sounded nice.

that shit was tight ya flow was good....the beat was raw but ya quality needs some work but other that that its a hot track.......keep this shit up ma..8/10

good shyt fiya...

definitely a difference between this and ya older shyt... the beat was cool but lacked bass... bass it up and add that gutter feel to it... make it sound more spooky like mobb deep did on that joint with lil kim... ya vocals was aiighth... some parts of ya verse sounded a lil off the beat but not by much... should be an easy fix... liked when ya sped ya verse up... shoulda added more of that in there...

ayo... i'm giving you ya props now cuz i ain't sure if i'll be facing you in the crew battle...lol... you still my homie and all but crew battles are a totally different story... i'll come give you a hug and a shout out afterwards... it's only business... never personal... one...lol

this shit was hot foreal.....your flow was cool and your dubz was cool lyrics was good.....gud job ma word

This track sucked.Fuck Fiya.

^LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haaaaa *DIED* thanx for the up.

No..seriously..ur shit sucked.

All I heard "liqour..guns..bacardi...cups..clubs..blah-blah-blah..and even more"

COs really...all this club banging shit is PLAYED AS FUCK.If I wanted to hear something like this I woulda turned on the radio.I don't wanna hear that garabge.Ur subject matter is ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ. :bored: Cause everyone hates on the mainstream for their redunant techniques...yet you do the same shit...and guess wat?...you get posts like this \/\/\/




Fukin pathetic.

And also...go get urself a new style.Instead of biting other people's one.

And based on that post u made up there ^^...it seems to me u actually think ur shit's nice...ha..

get ur head out ur own ass bitch

And I don't care if you got a bunch of d/r's that gonna give u credit when ur shit suked....I won't.

MY advice...you are a bitch..that is all..accept the fact that u are a bitch.And stop rapping.Bitches have no place in rap.Just suck dick and end it.

Ok bitch?

I didn't talk about guns or cups.. lmfao what are you listening to. Uhm no Bikini, for the last time, I'm not the club track type this a once in a life time type thing.

And that's not the only good comment I got. I'm not getting hyped of that. I'm actually looking for the bad comments so I can keep working at elevating. But had you not notice. And if you were listening at least a little bit, you'd know that I had wordplay not the forced kind like your text battle vs. Mim. :thumbup:

Keep upping this, it don't make a difference for me.

iite listenin, quality good......likin the end bit when you go fast but u gotta do much more....likin the flow, lyrics basic...keep shit up, please can you rtf and be different from loads of these cats that dont :(,

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210125

Thanks ma