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23. N.Tavarez (0-0) vs 24. T.r.oo.P (0-0)
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yeah, lets go
mine will be up shortly, beat me to it and you can pick the line limit |
Check Move.....
im throwin 10........ |
sorry playboy, 16 lines Im dropping, but
dont worry bout it enjoy ya birthday....... Ill take it from here :thumbup: Quote:
lol right? They NEVER knew you now you coming back acting retarded But shit even when you was active, you was actively garbage They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH Look Stop writing or reciting songs, And understand you aint a vet ...............Just hung around this fucking site too long Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas What you expected, warm hugs? these kicks stick to your ribs now He'll hit the Bricks fast enough to knock Redmans crib down And Happy Birthday, but dont post none of those rhyme lines, fool Or I' ma give this 20/20....... like Prime Time News *Throws birthday cake on the floor, crip walks on it* |
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*Pix cake up and Smacks u wit it....and Pulls u Back In by ya shirt * Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols "Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle So Pussy Stop Frontin..like u Holdin Sumtin Skinny Mofo tryna Flex Observin a Pick Up Game Only Time Nebody Say your whats Next This 2 Easy.... im writein this wit Out Lookin so call it a No Looka This time u gettin Fucked and Burned Like you was on a 30 Day..... Unprotected Rendeavu With a Hooka I bet you Wrote ya Battle at School and got suspended for Cussin Ill Smack u wit a "Taco" and Ring ya "Bell" And go 2 Jail...........For attempt Murder of Eddie Guerrero's Cousin Fuck what you Had...Ya Lost It Fag......Cuz like ya HotShh ya Asss Ima Piston that'll Pop ya "Bubble" ....Like tha otha 23 from the Cav's You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On *Smacks u and Eats tha Cake u Paid 4.....* *Nuff Said* 4 tha "Bubble" line...Lebron James has his Own Bubble Gum |
*Pix cake up and Smacks u wit it....and Pulls u Back In by ya shirt *
^^lmao at that good battle, upping for votes edit:from NY, but close enough |
Ny ....New Jersey same shit.....
good Battle Son./.... |
cool battle
N.Tavarez fav lines They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas had some played shit like bricks and lifes a bitch line..rest of the verse was solid tho TROOP Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols "Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle ^^shit was nice other shit was kinda stretched like the eddie guerrero and hooka line..verse was str8...just couldn't get into it troops like i could taverez...cool battle but vote-N.Tavarez |
Tav got it, punches - the few he had didnt hit hard but were way better concepts and... most importantly.. were actual punches. Tr i suggest u work on ur wording and focus on punching him and not the older, played out way of battling. I'mean if u guys got a week to write something, dont just freestyle it and expect to impress. Work on ur shit, think through ur punches, and actually take pride in it and get some good material.
Take a look at PR.com or RM.com none of those guys use this style anymore because its just no longer appealing. Dont get me wrong I dont throw away Tupac CD's or KRS one but still, I wouldnt put that shit in during parties or whatever. In the end, Tav got it for just merely outshining troop. V/Tav - who had the lifes a bitch line which was his best punch. |
N.Tav had flow and punches with mad diversity and mu;tie keyed phrases that was cool
They NEVER knew you now you coming back acting retarded But shit even when you was active, you was actively garbage ^^This was a nice opener, hi em GOOD! best line though was this.. Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink ^^Hit witha punch and a mix of multie creativity!. Troop. Your flow was ok but it seemed like you were going to far into some kind of E-Net ghetto flow hood nigga fo real. Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols "Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle ^^ Funny shit mayne real creative too but didnt hit well. that was the only worth while punch you threw...the rest you threw in were kinda plaid or word'd bad. nothing else man real got my attention. V/ Tav for more consistancy and punches that connected well! |
thanks for the votes
3-0 uppin good battle troops |
lol @ me bein able 2 smash every muthafucka that voted
lol...good drop hot |
They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH Look vs. Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols "Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On both had a few good punches but N. tavarez had better wording and was more solid threw out cuz troop had a few wack lines and n. tav only had like one. vote- n tav |
They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink vs. You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On ya, Tav got this. not the best drop tho, some played concepts like the lifes a bitch and the bricks lines, but i was feelin the nameplays, the bully on the rocks was fresh. Troops just didnt really have anything in his verse, that new jersey line was the best one probably, but Heat wordplays are as old as text, so i wouldn't give it too much credit. vote- tav, easy. |
They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink Vs. Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols "Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle even though it could have been worded much better overall ok battle, N. came aite, wasnt feelin much in T.r.oo.p's verse, didnt like his wording for the most part.... much respect to both emceez... vote- N.Tavaerz |
They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas Vs You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On V/hot......this was a good battle both came wit some good punchs and wordplay i felt N.T had a more consistent verse he had better personals |
They NEVER knew you now you coming back acting retarded
But shit even when you was active, you was actively garbage They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas VS. I bet you Wrote ya Battle at School and got suspended for Cussin Ill Smack u wit a "Taco" and Ring ya "Bell" And go 2 Jail...........For attempt Murder of Eddie Guerrero's Cousin You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On Right, I've seen a few people comment on the played concepts... so fucking what, everything is played nowadays.. but if it still makes you laugh then it is decent. Those are the bars I quoted, ones that made me laugh. N.Tav started real strong with some nice bars, fell off towards the end but the Troops overseas line was dope. Troop dropped pretty weak, that last bar was decent but his best one was the eddie guerrero's cousin line... i don't know why, it just made me laugh to the point where I almost fell off my seat. It was the funniest bar of the battle to me, I must have a strange sense of humour. But anyway, Tav was way more consistent and takes this battle easily. V/ - N.Tavarez |
They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink vs You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On ^^^ i mean if the rest of troops verse was like his closer he may have had a chance but as it stands N.Tavarez got this with some ease not an increadibly hot bout but i dig both styles v/n tavarez |
Tav had some decent nameplays, that were enough to take this down.
They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas VS Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols "Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle Even that is borderline^ V./ tav. |
They NEVER knew you now you coming back acting retarded
But shit even when you was active, you was actively garbage They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas vs. Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols "Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle Smashed, I laughed from the first half of Tav's verse sorry Troop but you didn't show up for this, prolly woulda been better no showin Vote - N. Tavarez |
Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think
And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas vs Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols "Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle Troop came a little weak then i thought...i mean this should've been a real good battle but it just came out that N. Tavarez just came basically better... v/N. Tavarez |
They NEVER knew you now you coming back acting retarded
But shit even when you was active, you was actively garbage They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas VS. You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On wow, troop didn't even come as hard as I thought he would. this was basically a walk in the part for hot. he got this pretty easy. Troop came decent, but not enough for the victory. v/N.Tav |
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They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas vs You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On Eh.. v/ hotshh! |
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas What you expected, warm hugs? these kicks stick to your ribs now He'll hit the Bricks fast enough to knock Redmans crib down And Happy Birthday, but dont post none of those rhyme lines, fool Or I' ma give this 20/20....... like Prime Time News i didnt get that bully on the rocks line... i'd say this battle prolly wasnt hot's best shit but we got some decent wordplay out oof it. best linie to me was the redman line. haha lol brick city in this bitch *i dont think some ppl got the wordplay but w/e* i JUST got the 20/20 line upon my 2nd time reading this battle, good shit. overall, i see the effort put it and im a fan of lyrics and wordplay so i'll say this was a good verse. not ur best, but good.' vs Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols "Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On honestly, i expected a bit more from troop. he started off good with some original delivery, but then his verse kinda drifted back to that like 04 rapverse type shit with simple similies as punchesc like the "fucked and burned" line... i've seen this concept before.... delivery and all. some parts of ur battle show elevation but other parts dont, so i'll say just be more consistant witht the dope shyt and you'll come out on top but i have to say this one goes to hot basically for more quotables... both verses were decent and the quoteables were all about equally raw... so i hadda just choose who had more quoteables which is Hotshh... V/ N Tavarez |
They can expect a slaughter, I disrepect my daughters
Send Troops Down, fast enough to protect the border, And cut em short like a pack of smokes til his back is broke Lifes a bitch huh? I guess that explains your lack of BOTH Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas vs. nothing... murder. v/tavarez |
N.Tavarez wins.
N.Tavarez (1-0) T.r.oo.P (0-1) |
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