Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
No Pre-Writeing

I SPIT FIRST

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-04 at 05:21 PM

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DQ for going over 10 lines

* Stonez * has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 04:52 PM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 04:53 PM.

U puttin' holez-in- DIs Vet??..U must be at wAr wit Animal Doctorz
i'll "fit" U for Cement Timb'z..have 'dis CRAB shackin-wit-LOBSTERZ {"sleepin' wit da fishez"}
or packaged-wit- Hoffa..act "civil" Stonez or leave-in-Defeat>
i'm like a "winning Poker hand"..deal a verse..U'll "read-it-and-weep"
U destined fa' Trash Heapz..ICE restricted-dis-Clown'z-callz>
cause Stonez aint been "declared" since Im PREDICTING-ya-Downfall
best losen ya' SADDLE..'dis ride'z ova Faggot..now hand my COCK back
U'z a WaterBoy..recordin' my Statz and totin-my-JOCK-STRAP
hopin-ICE-wack??..i bring SLUMBER to "tired" Rapperz
yo' Mini-bOmbz ain't X-plOsiveZz..ya' ARSENAL'z FireCrackerz
Retired Masterz "resurface" wit skillz-to-Malign-a-Newbie
U not a wAr Hero cause U got killed-in-da- Line-of-Duty
i've molded-ya-view..PICK came thru to perform-da-EULOGY>
only BATTLE 'dis Stoned Souljah Boy fought was da wAr-on-Puberty--------

no no no no o no no no nono look 6- 10 lines u blind???

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"Its The Definition"

... Open . . Battles ...
VS Wisdom 2-1 ME

VS Cannabars 1-3 HIM

VS Skriptz 0-2 HIM


The RV. Takeover Is Around The Corner
Record
5-2

and tryin to bite off of ludacris wut a shame nigga

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"Its The Definition"

... Open . . Battles ...
VS Wisdom 2-1 ME

VS Cannabars 1-3 HIM

VS Skriptz 0-2 HIM


The RV. Takeover Is Around The Corner
Record
5-2

Oh And What Did I Bite Off Of Ludacris

Buddy
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Voted For: Ice Pick

See this is how you come Ice Pick, should of did that verses me, lol.. naw, on the real though, you came with much better wordplay, and good syllable count.. your opener was a lot better than his.. the champ is here is kinda corney.. and there were a few more corney lines in stonez' verse, and it lacked wordplay.. your punchlines hit harder.. the structure was good from both but vocab also goes to you, which was incorporated into the wordplay..
so Ice Pick you get my vote cuz..

keep it gangsta and return the favor with a drop in my thread will u? thanx, heres the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

usually it says 6 to unlimited lines

so yeah i must be blind

SORRY I WOULD HAVE POSTED TEN LINES BUT DIDNT REALLY READ THE RULES

SO WHAT EVER IS WHAT EVER DUDE

IF YA GONNA BE A BITCH THEN BE A BITCH

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^Me too

Voted For: Ice Pick

Ice Pick won this hands down. He came with more, better, and harder punches than Stonez did. Stonez, bro, you gotta work on your flow, it came off a little choppy to me, and your punches just weren't all that great. No hate...

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Man stonez, that was so damn weak, man lmfao, ice pick had you in the beggining middle and at the end, i wasnt feelin your ryhmes, your punches werent effective, you had no personells, even if your verse was ten times hotter, youd still be merked, and thats not meant as a compliment to pick, its meant as an insult to you, i was feelin picks flow and he had some personells on you, along with wack rhymes and some great punches, simply put, STONEZ was OWNED,