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Old 10-01-04, 11:39 PM   #16
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Voted For: RobKilla

RobKilla gets my vote..

His punches were played~out~harder..
tha flow was good & same wit tha structure too..
and tha vocab was aight..

Maku yo shit was good too..
tha punches couldve been a little harder & ur structure was aight..(dont space them out..)
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Old 10-02-04, 11:25 AM   #17
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both of you return my fucking honest vote what the fuck see this is whats wrong with fucking r.v now

dude, calm down, i returned a while ago
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Old 10-02-04, 03:27 PM   #18
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let's up this one, amidst the bullshit
 
Old 10-05-04, 07:47 PM   #19
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

Maku: One Nice Meta... a bunch of clever similies- simple multies at the end of each line but it all in all had good flow... I felt your shit.
RobKilla: You had a couple decent bars--- but the Run its Godzilla punch was horrible... and rhymin gay with say is definately below your level .... Vote Maku.
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Old 10-05-04, 09:25 PM   #20
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin
RobKilla: You had a couple decent bars--- but the Run its Godzilla punch was horrible... and rhymin gay with say is definately below your level .... Vote Maku.

hey man... i was out of it that day... i just wastn feelin the flow... and that run its godzilla- i officially apologize to the web site for the wackest line ever!! I AM SORRY
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Old 10-10-04, 05:01 PM   #21
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hahahah Godzilla line had me rollin............... and i think u merked him............ but im juss checkin polls
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Old 10-10-04, 05:03 PM   #22
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hahaha jk............... but u should get Seven third vote dqd........... didnt really say much........
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Old 10-16-04, 01:42 PM   #23
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Robkilla:
I'll snatch yo "loose change" so fast, you wont have time to snap back...
he's so unused to "applause" he took out a 9 to try and "clap back"
Ok opener, punch was ehh, but I got the wordplay...2.5/4
You stink, you feel glum the way nobody's fearin you...
You must feel real "dumb" the way nobody's "hearin" you
Good rhyming, but the punch didn't hit, 1/4
you are what i cant be? is that what yo motto say?
Must be true, its impossible for me to be that gay...
Made me laugh a lil' bit, but the punch was simple and gay concepts are played, 1.5/4
What are you, Japanese dude? dont worry about RobKilla
here's more important news... RUUUUNNNN!!! ITS GODZILLA!
The highlight of your verse, funny shit, although the punch wasn't that hard, 2.5/4
This man's record proves it... 9-9 tha jive hoe...
its split 50-50... so i know it'll be 5-0
Aight wordplay, but it seemed a little self-glorifying, 2/4

Total: 9.5/20

Maku
the 'reign' of this king begins now, so i would bring coats//
cuz you won't have hot bars if you melted irish spring soap//
Great rhyming, good wordplay, average punch, 3.5/5
i video taped me and ya girl, when i offered her ten bucks//
so like tupacs sentencing televised, you was watching me get fucked//
This was aight, the punch didn't really connect that much, 2.5/5
wit no warnin i bus, what can i say to this bitch if 'she' hate this//
"grow up and swallow, cuz like that columbine killer i 'spray kids'!"//
Just simple here, punch wasn't hard, 1.5/5
I started ill and stopped, cuz you don't want me to come back and rap lines//
i'm an unwanted return, like owing thousands back at tax time//
This one didn't hit very hard either, 1.5/5

Total: 9/20

Winner: Robkilla, but both of you need some elevatin', no hate, return a vote at a link in my sig...
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Old 10-16-04, 02:05 PM   #24
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Voted For: RobKilla

V/ Robkilla

Well this was actually close...Robkilla had a nice opener which had me laughing....the rest was just blah...nothing else was quotable...the godzilla line was horrible...Maku coulda taken this...he had sum okay meta's...but they were more self glorifying...they werent punches...jsut good meta's...and u need punches to win a battle...so rob gets this
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Old 10-17-04, 02:38 AM   #25
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checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573
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Old 10-20-04, 12:02 AM   #26
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Voted For: RobKilla

vote goes to RobKilla, good verse there.
maku, your shit was a bit wack, no offence, it was easy to understand so that was good but you need to improve your punches

please return and honest vote onone of the battltes below
 
 


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