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Old 07-17-05, 12:35 PM   #1
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Kordozar vs Daubs

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Old 07-17-05, 12:36 PM   #2
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Old 07-17-05, 12:50 PM   #3
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Old 07-17-05, 12:52 PM   #4
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Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore!
Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court
Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns
We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return
Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain
I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name
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Old 07-17-05, 12:57 PM   #5
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This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do..
Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you..
Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me..
And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty..
Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause..
Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look, < just a subjective clause..

Explinations if needed:

Bar1 = Kord > Dork and simple wordplay.
Bar2 = loyalty royalty, his user title.
Bar3 = Jaguar is a car and cat> cars and paws/cause a pause. He joined in december.


Everything else is too simple imo, dont get something PM me or dont vote

I will rtf on honest explained votes.
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Old 07-17-05, 01:02 PM   #6
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WTF it missed my last punch out?! .

Strobe will fix it, anyway GL.
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Old 07-17-05, 02:21 PM   #7
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Voted For: Kordozar

This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do..
Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you..
HAHA..
Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me..
And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty..
OK
Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause..
Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look,
UM..OK I GUESS


BREAKDOWN-VERSE WAS OK...DIDN'T REALLY STRIKE ME AT ALL EXCEPT FOR YOUR OPENER WHICH WAS PRETTY NICE...I DON'T KNOW WHERE THE RHYME IS IN YOUR CLOSER AND I READ THE BITCH LIKE 30 TIMES...




Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore!
Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court
HAHA..NICE
Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns
We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return
HAHA
Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain
I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name
OK


BREAKDOWN-YOUR VERSE WAS PRETTY GOOD...HAD SOME PUNCHES IN THERE WITH A PERSONAL ON HIS NAME...PRETTY NICE

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Old 07-17-05, 04:31 PM   #8
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Iight Good Lookin I'll Return The Favor....
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Old 07-17-05, 04:36 PM   #9
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar

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polls............................................. ...
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Old 07-18-05, 12:42 AM   #10
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Kind Of Shit Is That? Uppin For Votes...
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Old 07-18-05, 01:30 AM   #11
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Voted For: Kordozar

Pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to kordozar

Daubs

This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do..
Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you..
Decent opener
Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me..
And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty..
naw
Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause..
Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look, < just a subjective clause..
Naw

Kordozar


Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore!
Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court
Decent Opener
Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns
We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return
naw
Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain
I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name
nice

Overall vote : Kordozar..for having better punchlines..and a couple of good nameplays

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Old 07-18-05, 01:29 PM   #12
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check in the pollz................................
 
Old 07-18-05, 04:38 PM   #13
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Voted For: Daubs

u had good openin but a bit of a weak closing....nice wordplay...(kord) to (dork)...lmao....good multis and punches with good confidence....

the first bar of dork....weak but good rhyming...
2nd... " "
3rd... " "

Overall vote
Daubs

Nice rhyming skills dorkozar

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Old 07-18-05, 06:58 PM   #14
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checkin pollss.... you got this man.......................
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Old 07-19-05, 10:17 AM   #15
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^^^ Lol But Anyways Upping For More Honest Votes.
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