Battle Rules:

6 -12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-03-04 at 12:33 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.


DQ.. went over limit limit

raw killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 12:34 PM.

Lethal Lunatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 12:49 PM.

this nigga must b on his monthly cuz he bitchin,
dont test me bitch cuz my trigger finger itchin/

ima make sure u feel my(makes a spittin sound)spit,
im feelin dis ima bout 2 kill dis shit/

write,crimes,from my minds eye,soundin like devil warshipper's when i rhyme,n when i recite,
rituals like da feeding of christ,servin mc's as lamb'b 4 my sacrifice,n make u take ur defeat
wit a grain of rice,my lyrics like da wigi board callin spirits from out yo music device/

i got ur spit chokin for life,n my dicks chokin yo wife/

lethal lunatic good name cuz u must b crazy thinkin one of ur lines,could even share da same
space of 1 of mine,flow so powerful they turn back da hands of time,nigga screamin he wanna
b a millionare quick sum1 get this cat a life line,ur lines hurtin dawg here bite mine/

this niggaz bitch even his write-rs block,get it writers block,
when he throw's his pad in da fire da only time his rhymes r hot/

"Spittin Ill Cuz I'm Diseased And Infected",wit herpes but i he never 2 mentioned,
shit its aids i stand corrected,nigga stays soft like dick dat neva erected/

im blowin up his spots like explodin dalmations,dis nigga sends shots? yet da only thing
he sendin is carnations,his lyrics r dead sum help'em pray 4 theyre reincarnation/

the pens in his pockets da only things he carrying sharp,cryin like da tin man sayin if only
i had a heart,time u meet yo mark,while i eat dis battle n punch ya lines apart/

hey yo bitch next time pm when ur done how da fuck am i supposed 2 kno 4 1 2 kno fuckin crew votes at all i see im reportin u 2 da administrators period good luck pussy

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you wrote more than 12 lines so your dqed bitch good luck wit ya lost

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A crip just like Bonecollector

aint no dq 4 more lines if u count da / marks u'll see i jus write long lines n i only have 9 u fucker

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Voted For: Lethal Lunatic

IMa vote for Lethal cos his verse was better by a lil bit
he had better punches and personals. your structure was good and so was your flow. Raw verse was ok but you lost points in Structure and flow your punches are ok but i have to go with lethal vor a better verse

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Voted For: raw killa

some strong punches i dint see any personals,ya flow was a bit choppy but i could still follow it,you had better vocab but i think ya gotta try n shortin ya lines a bit i think it'll make them more effective..nice verse..aight verse 2 i liked ya opener,way ta bring the new system in ta play with that decline line,but you had simple vocab n i did'nt perticularly think dissin his crew helped ya verse until the last line n i was'nt even feelin that line..so half your verse was really wasted cause you werent battlin killa ya were takin shots at his crew...although i liked the raw kill/bam line you moved 2 far off topic talkin bought his crew...im sure most vets would agree with me that it hurt your verse more than helped it...sorry dawg....good battle
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left...2 many herbs

yo you guys need ta stop ya bitchin n jus let da voters decide..it was a good battle either of you's could take it,its jus a matter of what catches the voters eye n what they think...goo'luck ta both emcees...pc