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02-03-05, 11:10 AM
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Flyweight
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TUNIT vs Lord.Wun
IP: 1BD5 13B2
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6 - 8 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 02-03-05 at 11:40 AM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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02-03-05, 11:20 AM
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#2
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IP: B1A5 868C
TuNiT has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 11:20 AM.
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02-03-05, 11:28 AM
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#3
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Guest
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
Lord.Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 11:28 AM.
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02-03-05, 11:29 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: B1A5 868C
yo they saw am more deadly than a aligator clutchin a BAZOOKA
So if the jaba-jaws dont get ya you know ima SHOOT-YA i'll DILUTE-YA PEOPLE cause i get straight to da point like a CHURCHES STEEPLE Ya rhyme schemes FEBEL, an your born ta BORE only time you'll ever light up the stage is bein a rodie on TOUR ya bout as HARDCORE as the DISNEY CHANNEL an even if you sent a BRIBE out i'd still get the votes from the PANEL ! |
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02-03-05, 11:44 AM
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#5
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Flyweight
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
Let's Skip to Rap Basics..At a Skale Of 10..Tunit's Neva "met-a-four".. Drop da Rap Act..His normal battles is shit like..Who da Betta whore.. Gatz hit Ya Chest, So that way you can really "Spit From The Heart".. Any Kinda Verse he sends to Record Labels, They Jus' Rip Em Apart.. But Let Me Speed things Up...But I mean That in No Homo Terms.. 'Cause last time i said that,Kid Got Horny..Oh well, the homo learned.. But Fuck It Imma End it with a Bang..Like the ends of Porno flicks.. I can see why he gay, last gurl chopped em off, ..So now he walks with strap on Dicks..
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02-03-05, 05:18 PM
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#6
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Flyweight
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
upping this...........
.....................Ill vote on your shit...
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02-03-05, 05:48 PM
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#7
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Is F'in Bored
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IP: A4E7 A821
Voted For: Lord.Wun
Not a very hot battle yall but i gotta give this one to Lord wun. His word plays were better then t unit's because t unit's didn't make sense. Jabber jaw was a shark. His punches were pretty weak too. But lord's wasn't much much better. just enough to pull off the vote. unit's multi was kinda lame too. No hate but that's just my opinion. but lord's gotta get off those gay jokes cause they're played. unless you can make an exceptional word play or something try to sway away from those. Both need to elevate no hate. But i always return the favor so yall should. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174830 me vs. Mafia http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024 me vs. intensify effect http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173417 me vs. os1ris http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171308 me vs. nightmare
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02-03-05, 05:49 PM
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#8
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Flyweight
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
word aiight thanx for the honest vote......uppin this
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02-03-05, 05:55 PM
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#9
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
Voted For: Lord.Wun
diz was an one-sided battle da whole way: opener: lord.wun vocab: lord punches: lord personals: lord structure: lord closer: lord da reason i chose lord 2 win my vote is b'cuz 1 he came alot harder; 2 he got str8 2 da point tunit u didn't get my vote cuz 1 u stretched ur rhymes 2 much; & took a long time 2 get 2 da point |
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02-03-05, 06:29 PM
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Back....
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IP: F478 E16C
Voted For: Lord.Wun
Lord Wun Let's Skip to Rap Basics..At a Skale Of 10..Tunit's Neva "met-a-four".. Drop da Rap Act..His normal battles is shit like..Who da Betta whore.. Liked it. Very good opener. 10/10 Gatz hit Ya Chest, So that way you can really "Spit From The Heart".. Any Kinda Verse he sends to Record Labels, They Jus' Rip Em Apart.. Guess I liked it. just work on your shit like that.8/10 But Let Me Speed things Up...But I mean That in No Homo Terms.. 'Cause last time i said that,Kid Got Horny..Oh well, the homo learned.. Well nice bar and I liked the way it flowed. 10/10 But Fuck It Imma End it with a Bang..Like the ends of Porno flicks.. I can see why he gay, last gurl chopped em off, ..So now he walks with strap on Dicks.. There I finiished ur line. Ver dope closing 10/10 You need to improve and land ur punches better thats all. Don't even need to vote for him. he needs work in all. Just work on it. You''ll do good....
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02-03-05, 06:41 PM
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#11
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Flyweight
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
word 3-0 me...uppin thiss shit ill return da fav....
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02-03-05, 07:04 PM
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#12
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Flyweight
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
im gutta like butta and im uppin this battle ma fucka
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02-03-05, 07:28 PM
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#13
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King of Honolulu
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IP: 3E60 38C3
Voted For: Lord.Wun
Lord.Wun... you had some tite ass shit... most def took this... you had better structure and better metaphors and better everything... point blank TuNiT... you need to work on alot... your style reminds me of Shottaboi... and that's definately not good. Structure is important in text... work on it. And Also up your punches as well.
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02-03-05, 07:46 PM
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#14
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 8A1A D0A3
Voted For: Lord.Wun
winner- Lord Wun very close battle, u two are very evenly matched in this battle flow-tie multi-Lord Wun inner rhyming-Tunit punches-Lord Wun Let's Skip to Rap Basics..At a Skale Of 10..Tunit's Neva "met-a-four".. Drop da Rap Act..His normal battles is shit like..Who da Betta whore.. Gatz hit Ya Chest, So that way you can really "Spit From The Heart".. Any Kinda Verse he sends to Record Labels, They Jus' Rip Em Apart.. these 2 bars were hot. Punch was strong and so were the multis But Let Me Speed things Up...But I mean That in No Homo Terms.. 'Cause last time i said that,Kid Got Horny..Oh well, the homo learned.. But Fuck It Imma End it with a Bang..Like the ends of Porno flicks.. I can see why he gay, last gurl chopped em off, ..So now he walks with strap on Dicks.. heavy punches, nice finisher Tunit yo they saw am more deadly than a aligator clutchin a BAZOOKA So if the jaba-jaws dont get ya you know ima SHOOT-YA i'll DILUTE-YA PEOPLE cause i get straight to da point like a CHURCHES STEEPLE punch was aight, u sorta praised urself a lil bit Ya rhyme schemes FEBEL, an your born ta BORE only time you'll ever light up the stage is bein a rodie on TOUR ya bout as HARDCORE as the DISNEY CHANNEL an even if you sent a BRIBE out i'd still get the votes from the PANEL ! nice inner rhyming, punch was good finisher was hot |
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