Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-03-05 at 07:06 PM

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MetEoR-K has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 06:49 PM.

Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 06:50 PM.

Your only strapped when tied to a bar burning in a pit of flame
You a nobody, I don't wanna hear you even spit my name
No biting? Well dude looks like you broke your own rule
My flow is smooth as a car, and you choke on the fuel
You use your pimps rhymes, like monkey see monkey do
They suck like a bitch, but are also a little funny too
Sorry but I'm about to tack a 1 after your 4 dash
Why you rap everything you rhyme is sure wack
My flow is moving, it'll make you go to a lake
Tie cement to your shoes, and you think you'd wake
But I ain't a dream, I'm as real as can be dude
I deflect your punch's with rhymes, now shoe!

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Damn, good luck dude, I ain't that confident at the verse I jus spit

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Uppin for some votes, yo yo yo, vote or die =p....

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uppin for the W.......................................

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Voted For: Invektive

V/Invektive....this was a onesided battle invektive had this one cause of his diss's an vocab wit good structure he was more creative wit the personals....meteor-k ur verse was to basic nuthin really creative wit the punchs or vocab...no hate elavate.....
punchs=In
vocab=in
structure=in
opener=IN
closer=In
overall=Invektive
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Voted For: Invektive

Meteor k got treated on this one. Meteor k's punches were a little weak, and his rhymes were basic they were more like jokes rather then punchlines and no personals. no multis either. invektive had no multis but the play on his name was pretty good, but i don't know if the personal on him admitting defeat was true. nice play on his hometown too. plus he went over the line limit by 6. return the favor

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Voted For: MetEoR-K

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my bad i meant to hit feedback so jus get dat vote removed......

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Voted For: Invektive

Aiight look both came weak as hell.. METEO, you tried some multies so that was good but you didnt follow through with them enough, and you had absolutly no punches.

Invektive, #1 dont ever rely on links to be your punchline, that was weak like whoa.. I think you definatly need to work on concepts and punchlines, but you got potential.

The other dude needs to work on everything. But I think thats cause he probably just started writing rhymes.. So just keep at it man.

PEACE.

uppin this.............................................. ...

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