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KhAoZ ThEoRy vs Young Dollar
IP: 3240 794D
Battle Rules: Battle Rap
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Normal rules do watcha do homie Minimum posts to vote: 80 Check in by: 05-30-05 at 09:15 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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IP: 9445 4168
KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 10:24 AM.
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==bLaCk-HanD==
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IP: 9445 4168
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U Gonna Stay A Free Agent, I Advize DonT Get Ya Hopez Up ''Hot Bills''? Only Tyme U Been ''On Ice'' Is Playin Witta ''Hockey Puck'' PM'd Me, Sayin ''Dont Duck?'' But Why The Fuck Wuld I? U Aint ''Alignin'' Yo Texts Rite, Lyke U Only Got 1 ''Good Eye'' I Wuld Cry, Not Frum Da Challenge, But Frum Da Laughz U Culd Get On My Front Lawn, An U Still Unsure Bout ''Crossin My Path'' ''Vote Or Die Niggaz''? Datz A Thin Line, But I Think They Choose Da Latter U'd Think My Rhymez Wuzza ''Nine'' Cuz Diz Kid ''Runs & Scatters'' Yo Verses Are Juz Fillers, Dat Makez Ya' Beef Authentic Az ''I-Hop'' Dick Play? U Aint Been ''Touched'' Lyke A Jewish Kid Scared Ov Da Chop Ur ''Gased Up'' On ''Root BEER''...So Now U CanT Think Straight!? Ask Pac ''If Heaven Got A Ghetto'' U AINT NICE! Tho, I Got A Mil Dat God Wuldnt Even Let U Past Da Front GATE GangstATLANTA? I'll ''Bang-Head-Bounce-ya'' An Do Dat A-Town Stomp Lyke Yo Cyphers, U Aint ''Servin'' No Punz 4 Uz Niggaz 2 CHOMP Enter A Special ED Comp. An Even Da Dyslexics ''Get U Right'' Dey Said....''Wear Gary Colemanz Attire, Then U'll Be TIGHT!'' All Da Wordz In Bold Frum Da Quote U Will Find In Da Verse
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IP: 0825 899A
Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 02:16 PM.
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IP: 0825 899A
I know on da real dis nigga wont come *guns sparkin*
So i'll bust a nut in dudes mouths, so nigga can *cum talkin* Where did u get ya *game from*........... yo skillz is like Whitney Houston's weight,you need ta *gain some* So dont fuck wit me,Ill *dish chrome*dat'll leave ya *shit blown* cause dis dudes got 'less hooks' than a no *fish zone*/ Ya verses u do should be called *drastic flops* and if you so sick,why u still on da street like *traffic cops* U will never be a Boy in Da Hood,ridin in a *wax layer body Jag* Unless u just in da hood white chalk,in a *tax payer body bag* N I checked ya old post,i got rhymes to make ya brain *rupture* Da only thing dat was khaoctic about dude,was just his *structure* Homies rap cuz His John told em, He cant *See this* Cuz shawty just a fat white boy who cant see his *penis* Merk niggas wit guns N *Rhymes*, to merk ya body N lyrical *Mind* To Me Your just another sorry *Heaven Filler* Cuz If your a Livin Legend Then Im a *Legend Killer* True story...You dont know wat *thug bout*, niggas ~act~, *guns out*, blow his ~back~ to his *buns out*,squeese da ~mac~,till it *runs out*, Put a crome glock to ya *brain N Temple*, *Plain N simple*, Guns start singin as if it was Shirly *Temple* N ya fam knows da scenario of you bein *lost...scary* Now thats wat da fuck u call a *Khaos Theory* No Disrespect to neither Livin Legends got mad love N respect for dem folks. Nor to KT. Keep doin yall thang VOTE OR DIE BITCHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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IP: 0825 899A
nice battle folk i think i need to slow down on my punches cuz i think im givin to many
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==bLaCk-HanD==
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IP: 9445 4168
Cccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc Vote Vote Vote !!!!!!"""
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Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
lol very one sided... khaoz u have elevated alot since u joined props to you it took me like 1 year to elevate and u nearly as good as me but i was wacker than u so it evens out lol... n e wyz i felt u owned the shit out of him u had some good lines in there some were played somer wenrt but u did enough.... young... u nned help homie... sort out your structure make your lines like this: xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx instead of this: xxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx get me if u do that it will help on your structure get that right first and then get your punches in there... your punches wernt rlly hittin u had played concepts and u basically just need to think of better concepts and how to word them... thats it v/ khaoz for having harder punches better structure and all over better verse... keep droppin em you'll get better man trust me pzzzzzzzz n no hate ![]() |
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==bLaCk-HanD==
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IP: 0360 6114
Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote
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IP: D3CE BBC9
still uppin for more votes............................................. .
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==bLaCk-HanD==
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IP: 4F2F CBA3
Thru Da Wire, 2 Da Wall, All Mah Rhymez Iz Raw, All Deez Beats Beats Beats, All Ov Em Culd Of Been Lost!--=--Kanye West (Thru The Wire Alternative Lyrics)
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Semper Fi
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IP: D3CE BBC9
Still uppin for more votes
tippin for more votes pimpin for more votes shit i made a rap for more votes Still trippin for more votes kickin for more votes bitchin for more votes i even made a song for more votes more votes....im tippin Feedback im grippin I be doin da name rippin to da rain trippin gimme votes or ya dane missin Me on haze i aint trippin stay finger flippin on da curb pimpin Cuz back den didnt vote me Now im hot all on me back den didnt vote me now im hot all on me I said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! back den didnt vote me now im hot all on me Cuz i Who Dollar Doll Who? Dollar Doll Who? Dollar Doll lol jus messin but im thinkin bout postin it just to see some feedback
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Sam Dope
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IP: 7402 AF51
Voted For: Young Dollar
YD: Hot shit...wasnt expecting this Multies were nice, punches hit hard and got him where it hurts Personals were there, but they couldve been harder. Your structure was fine, so really no problem with your flow. KT: Ok man, honestly not the best that I have seen from you. Punches lacked creativity, and you were not as consistent as you have been in past battles. Personals were ok, but everything else you kinda fell off on. However, structure was fine, and so was the flow, but flow is not what wins a battle, punchlines are. Based on that, I am giving my vote to Young Dollar for his consistency with his punches Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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==bLaCk-HanD==
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IP: 5820 AA43
Ha Ha Ok, Letz Get Sum Proper Ass Voes In Diz Battle Plz
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Semper Fi
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IP: D3CE BBC9
uppin for more votes ay niggas got they own opinions...niggas see shit differently./but either way no hate cuz i think dis was a nice battle
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