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07-17-05, 12:35 PM | #1 | |||||
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Kordozar vs Daubs
IP: F8A9 5150
Battle Rules:
6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 07-17-05 at 01:05 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. Win by forfeit This Battle Is Now Closed
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07-17-05, 12:36 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: F8A9 5150
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 12:36 PM.
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07-17-05, 12:50 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 12:50 PM.
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07-17-05, 12:52 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: F8A9 5150
Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore!
Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name
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07-17-05, 12:57 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 828D 0B7A
This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do..
Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you.. Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me.. And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty.. Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause.. Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look, < just a subjective clause.. Explinations if needed: Bar1 = Kord > Dork and simple wordplay. Bar2 = loyalty royalty, his user title. Bar3 = Jaguar is a car and cat> cars and paws/cause a pause. He joined in december. Everything else is too simple imo, dont get something PM me or dont vote I will rtf on honest explained votes.
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07-17-05, 01:02 PM | #6 | ||||
NO SURRENDER
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IP: 828D 0B7A
WTF it missed my last punch out?! .
Strobe will fix it, anyway GL.
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07-17-05, 02:21 PM | #7 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Kordozar
This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do.. Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you.. HAHA.. Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me.. And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty.. OK Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause.. Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look, UM..OK I GUESS BREAKDOWN-VERSE WAS OK...DIDN'T REALLY STRIKE ME AT ALL EXCEPT FOR YOUR OPENER WHICH WAS PRETTY NICE...I DON'T KNOW WHERE THE RHYME IS IN YOUR CLOSER AND I READ THE BITCH LIKE 30 TIMES... Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore! Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court HAHA..NICE Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return HAHA Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name OK BREAKDOWN-YOUR VERSE WAS PRETTY GOOD...HAD SOME PUNCHES IN THERE WITH A PERSONAL ON HIS NAME...PRETTY NICE Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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07-17-05, 04:31 PM | #8 | |||||
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IP: DE86 280B
Iight Good Lookin I'll Return The Favor....
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07-17-05, 04:36 PM | #9 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
IP: 2808 906A
polls............................................. ...
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07-18-05, 12:42 AM | #10 | |||||
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IP: 9B2E BFC3
Kind Of Shit Is That? Uppin For Votes...
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07-18-05, 01:30 AM | #11 | ||||
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Voted For: Kordozar
Pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to kordozar Daubs This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do.. Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you.. Decent opener Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me.. And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty.. naw Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause.. Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look, < just a subjective clause.. Naw Kordozar Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore! Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court Decent Opener Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return naw Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name nice Overall vote : Kordozar..for having better punchlines..and a couple of good nameplays Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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07-18-05, 01:29 PM | #12 | |||||||
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
IP: 749A BA53
check in the pollz................................
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07-18-05, 04:38 PM | #13 | ||||
R.A.W Reality Has Began!!
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IP: CDA8 A0B5
Voted For: Daubs
u had good openin but a bit of a weak closing....nice wordplay...(kord) to (dork)...lmao....good multis and punches with good confidence.... the first bar of dork....weak but good rhyming... 2nd... " " 3rd... " " Overall vote Daubs Nice rhyming skills dorkozar Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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07-18-05, 06:58 PM | #14 | |||||||
Evolution
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
IP: 0DD2 7DAA
checkin pollss.... you got this man.......................
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07-19-05, 10:17 AM | #15 | |||||
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IP: D890 FA2C
^^^ Lol But Anyways Upping For More Honest Votes.
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